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um i did not get it. the whole flow was kind of raunchy. i like OC but not when it looks like the writer is putting themselves in as a MarySue so they can get their kicks in a twisted fashion. leave the personal fantasies in your warped mind and try writing again when you can come up with a plot. looks like you just used Reno's name so you could slap it in this section. the writing style wasn't that bad but that's the only thing i can say. OC are more for moving the story along, to keep a flow going. this is more of a self-insert.

You obviously either have never posted on FFN or went about it the wrong way. You can get away with so much over there it's not even funny.

Trust me. I know.

I have posted on fanfiction.net before, so I know you can stretch the limit a little bit. What I'm afraid of, though, is having someone tattle on me. I've seen people's accounts shut down for much less than what I'm doing. Also, this fic may get worse, depending on how I feel when I write later chapters. Hard-core smut isn't my thing, but it might get a little limey-er. *shrug* I really don't feel like trying ff.net, because I'd rather not have my account deleted. I'm sorry if you feel that I'm bothering you, but getting kicked off a website is more detrimental to my day than someone yelling at me.

Kiteekat

ps. If you would prefer to continue this conversation in private, my email address is blackkiteekat@yahoo.com.

Get the fuck out of this business before it's too late to save your dignity.

Whoops, too late.

If you wanna post this shit hit FFN.

Leave us alone over here.

Thank you,

Lee Caprice.

Wow. Such a helpful comment. Did it ever occur to you that the people at Fanfiction.net would freak out and close my account at even the slightest innuendo? Have you forgotten that sites like these are supposed to be for freedom of expression? At least I have a rudimentary grasp of grammar and spelling. Besides, dignity is a concept I abandoned long ago. =) Have fun in your eternal rage, though.

Kiteekat