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OMG. Believe it or not, I actually read this entire thing four times since I first discovered it, and I still love it just the same! You definitely have pure talent. I would love to see this fanfic in hardcover at like... B&N or something! I doubt you remember me though, but about 3 years ago I was known as "Auron Revolutionist" here (I think we know what probably happened there). But let me just say I've been waiting for years to leave you this comment, I honor you as a fanfiction writer, you've got unbelievable talent, and I hope you never stop! You never cease to amuse me, I love you! XD

second time reading this and it still makes me tear up :'( i wanna hug cid :( -scurries off to read next story-

Chapter 9! The one thing I loved the most about this chapter was the kitty is playing with the human's mentality. Cough...I meant you are clearly demostrating the full intelligence of Nanaki, and displaying his sense of observation and humor. I love how you added that. Everyone says that Red is smarter than his years, but you are actually showing. Yes! You are getting good at showing the difference between a story and a literary experience.

Heart!
Chaidrin

Hey! Last year I read Shattered Ice. Pure love in the strongest form. I loved it so much. And then I saw you were re-amping it. Yes! I was wondering if you had any Beta readers helping you, and if you would like another? I love your work, and I would love to help you improve it to its finest. If you would like the help, let me know when you finally get back on the internet. Thanks

Chaidrin

Love you! Heart!

Chapter Five! Sqeee! I love how you added the addition of Reeve's. I was always curious. And Cloud's comment on Sephiroth being his weakness and darkness was the perfect foreshadowing for Kingdom Hearts! Loved that very much, yes.... and the foreshadowing of Tifa being murphed at Reeve's. I love how you are adding the contiuous pin points that after the "Turn"(No spoilers for the others), we go "Oh, that explains it". I am definityly loving all the additions so far. More Reviews to Come.

Heart!'

Chaidrin

OMFG! The beginning was a little weak but then it has gotten a LOT better! Could you email me when the next chap comes out!? PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZE!

Felt to lazy to sign in, just wanted to drop a quick note to say I'm still enjoying the story very much and you're doing a great job on the rewrite.

Ciao

You know... you always can surprise people (this is said with a very thoughtful face and listening to "The promise land" A.Children OST)and I truly mean it. When I began to think you can not improve your story further, you just do it again and this is what surprised me the most.After reading it (again) complete, I´ve just realized that ,despite what I felt when I played the game the first time, I can´t became to hate Aerith anymore, or Yuffie for that matter, and that I was actually glad to see you bring the flower girl back(ÇoÇ bit confused at first)... Oh! well,now am just rambling about obvious things.Bottom line: you certainly can reach people´s core with your words, love your work.
bye
PD: Dont freak out for my lack of better words to compliment you but I forgot the best part... Vincent´s past was fuc.... well described.^_^'

OMG!!!!! now you do it... its greater than ... ever, oh! please update sooner,even more than last time please! You have a lot of people out here dying for this story,its simply amazing!!!
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You're doing just fine, I'm still around and still following the story.