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Ch. 25.

The way you have written her I get the impression of Lucrecia being more wilfilly blind and hung up on "the good of humanity" than particularly guilty. Her actions towards Vincent in particluar may have been harsh but they don't seem unexpected of someone reacting to an ex boyfriend who repeatedly critizes her [suposedly happy] marriage.

All in all, most of the blame still stays with Hojo, who you have deliberately manipulating Lucrecia for his own callous ends.

I do find however that her apparent refusal to say for sure that Sephiroth was Vincent's or not was particularly mean of her - both when Seph was born and in the cave.

Intelect =/= common sense.

I wuv you too ^__^

Chap. 25 made me feel so sad ;_; Poor Vincent.

As for chapter 26, well, I was rather expecting that twist. I don't think it's a bad change, generally I don't like stuff like that but here it doesn't bother me as much as usual. It actually piqued my curiousity. Oh and Reeve's phone conversation made me giggle with tears in my eyes, I guess I'm feeling emotional.

I wonder how the things will turn out. Very nice of you to post these chapters so fast ^_^ ... but I still want more. More! *tempts with cookies*

Okay, I don't mind reserecting Aeris, she is my top favourite female.

You? Scare me? The Great Lord Ickarous? Never! I love it! I can safely say that this story can go pretty much anywhere from this point on and i wouldn't stop reading or flame it in anyway. Thank you so much for updating so soon! I wasn't actually expecting you to do so..but thank you! Only now...that i have read it...YOU NEED TO UPDATE SOON!! lets try for..tomorrow? Too soon?

Awesome.

Updaaaate!!

^_^

Wow... I think you really captured Hojo's insane and demented nature. o_o I'm kind of on the edge of speechless. Dang, the things Vincent had to go through. I do like your idea of how Vincent acquired his demons, since there seems to be no other explaination. *nods* Nice.

Augh! I honestly don't know what to say other than you're doing a wonderful job. Please update soon. Poor Vincent needs some sweet lovin' from his captain. =(

again.. very nicly done!! Poor vinny!! awww ;_; i feel so bad for him, and lucreica? whoow she treated him like trash, besides, how could anyone LIKE hojo? >_< ewww

I said it before and I'll say it again: JUST DAMN.

There are a few grammatical errors, but I’m sure your beta will take care of those when you are presented with the final draft of this chapter - that said, thank you so much for sharing it before you got it back! I was hoping I’d see another chapter (or two.. three..) tonight!

The flashback - I can't even put into words how much I love your rendition of it! Not to mention you are one of FEW who can proudly say you managed a rape scene with finesse. Incredibly done, the whole retelling!

I'll be eagerly awaiting more! Please don't keep us in suspense!!

*looks at your notes of all the fics* Yes please. That's my answer. :D I'll read them all.

XD I KNEW SHE WAS A HORRIBLE WENCH!! Going for something like Hojo when she could have had Vincent. VINCENT!!!.. There's no way in heck I'd choose something like Hojo over Vincent. Horrible woman, blind by her science. *never really liked Lucrecia* Ahem. :D Hi. *waves*

Awww... Poor Vinnie! *Huggles him*

Vincent: Get off me!
Drac: Never, cause you need hugs and hugs until you're happy!

WHAM!

Now why'd he run off?