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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I remember now. I asked if there was someone else beside Aerith that Cloud faniced, because he seem more incline to like someone other than Aerith.
Man, Cid was on fire! And it seemed the Vincent was very turned on by that. I had to laugh when Cloud was second guessing himself on the level of Cid and Vince's relationship. Can't wait until it's out in the open. What's up with Yuffie and Nanaki? It's like they have a little something on the side but not really. It's the little things that goes on between them.
Reeve... well, he's got some issues too, and that's all I'm going to say on that subject.
Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!
Nemesis ^_~
Man, Cid was on fire! And it seemed the Vincent was very turned on by that. I had to laugh when Cloud was second guessing himself on the level of Cid and Vince's relationship. Can't wait until it's out in the open. What's up with Yuffie and Nanaki? It's like they have a little something on the side but not really. It's the little things that goes on between them.
Reeve... well, he's got some issues too, and that's all I'm going to say on that subject.
Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!
Nemesis ^_~
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch16: Now, I can't remember what I had asked. I have to go back and read what I had wrote. But for this chapter I have to say that I'm glad that Cloud is okay. And I'm thrilled that Vince & Cid are getting their act together.
Excellent work! CanLt wait to read the next chapter.
Nemesis ;-)
Excellent work! CanLt wait to read the next chapter.
Nemesis ;-)
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I didn't have a computer for five months, so since my memory is crap, I have to reread all of this. Something I'm am thoroughly enjoying.... Now since I am done with the pleasantries, get updating PLEASE! FOR THE LOVE OF KAMI! PLEASE! (I like it)
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally, Cid & Vincent get their damn act togehter! Man, I thought that I was gonna have to beat some sense into those two.
And I have to say, "What a lovely get together it was." (takes off glasses to wipe the steam off)
Now, I have a question to when Yuffie, Nanaki, and Reeve were talking about Cloud (loved that scene btw it was just too cute!) having a thing going with Aerith and possible Tifa. I know that there was no way that Cloud fancied Tifa. Aerith...well, she's a bit iffy too. I'm thinking that there was someone else. Am I right? Just tell so I can sleep at night.
Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!
Nemesis ^_~
And I have to say, "What a lovely get together it was." (takes off glasses to wipe the steam off)
Now, I have a question to when Yuffie, Nanaki, and Reeve were talking about Cloud (loved that scene btw it was just too cute!) having a thing going with Aerith and possible Tifa. I know that there was no way that Cloud fancied Tifa. Aerith...well, she's a bit iffy too. I'm thinking that there was someone else. Am I right? Just tell so I can sleep at night.
Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!
Nemesis ^_~
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know it's been awhile, but i've been busy with real life stuff. Still enjoying very much and I like the devolping friendship between Nanaki and Yuffie.
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahh! The new additions with Cid and Reeves were great :D
I never really thought about if Reeves knew that Tifa was a traitor.. but thats cool you mentioned it :D
yay! back to the yummy CidxVincent at the end of the chapter <3
I never really thought about if Reeves knew that Tifa was a traitor.. but thats cool you mentioned it :D
yay! back to the yummy CidxVincent at the end of the chapter <3
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March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*flails* Nooo! Cliffhanger!
(So what if I know what happens in the original. That's beside the point.)
I'm so glad you got another chapter in, though (as usual) it's not nearly enough. *sniffle*
I'd forgotten your CxV. Maybe that's why I still prefer Ice over Dreams - the concentration on one relationship, instead of being relatively unfocused. I'm definitely not complaining, though. Hope to see more soon - where ever you update. n.n
~SneakyOne
(So what if I know what happens in the original. That's beside the point.)
I'm so glad you got another chapter in, though (as usual) it's not nearly enough. *sniffle*
I'd forgotten your CxV. Maybe that's why I still prefer Ice over Dreams - the concentration on one relationship, instead of being relatively unfocused. I'm definitely not complaining, though. Hope to see more soon - where ever you update. n.n
~SneakyOne
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February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Chapter Twelve is all warm and fuzzy! *Coos and makes an embarassment of herself* Yuffie and Red as you write them are indeed a match made in heaven, and it never fails to make me smile. Even if in-game Yuffie made me want to reach through the screen and throttle her. I also like how Cid tries to dodge being the authority figure, even though he is the logical choice. With the foreknowledge of his past, it makes a great deal of sense, as does his friendship with Reeve. They were practically neighbors growing up, if my one-cup-coffee memory serves me?
It does surprise me that Reeve and Archer couldn't find anything out about what happened to Vincent. Hojo strikes me as the anal-retentive type to record everything (after all, look what Sephiroth found in the Nibelhiem basement), and with mediocre hacking skills, could have access to the database. ...unless Hojo put everything in hard copy for that very reason.
Jeez, you're good. You've got me second-guessing my own theories. Keep up with the new scenes. They add depth and shape to your world.
It does surprise me that Reeve and Archer couldn't find anything out about what happened to Vincent. Hojo strikes me as the anal-retentive type to record everything (after all, look what Sephiroth found in the Nibelhiem basement), and with mediocre hacking skills, could have access to the database. ...unless Hojo put everything in hard copy for that very reason.
Jeez, you're good. You've got me second-guessing my own theories. Keep up with the new scenes. They add depth and shape to your world.
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, coffee, the elixer of the poor working-class. Now I'll really be able to review properly!
Well, another good pair of chapters. Tifa makes a good bad guy, when played right. I was surprised at that in the original story, and I'm admiring the characterization that's improved in Redux. The Reno/Reeve pairing is better done, I think, with more expression between them. It's less of a surprise to the readers, making it more real than it just dropping out of the blue.
Oh, and there's a small typo in one chapter, referring to Tifa's hips. It was accidentally written "way seductively" instead of "sway seductively". I'm pleased that it's the first incongruity in spelling and grammar (and that's just a simple typo!) that I've noticed in the whole series. Keep it up.
Well, another good pair of chapters. Tifa makes a good bad guy, when played right. I was surprised at that in the original story, and I'm admiring the characterization that's improved in Redux. The Reno/Reeve pairing is better done, I think, with more expression between them. It's less of a surprise to the readers, making it more real than it just dropping out of the blue.
Oh, and there's a small typo in one chapter, referring to Tifa's hips. It was accidentally written "way seductively" instead of "sway seductively". I'm pleased that it's the first incongruity in spelling and grammar (and that's just a simple typo!) that I've noticed in the whole series. Keep it up.
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just for me your putting in an extra Cid and Reeves sceane? Yaay! ^_^
Wow! I can't believe how horrable Cid's father was! Trying to "beat the gay" out of him! Thats horrable! :( Vincent's personality deffinitly seemed a bit differnt in the last sex sceane.. but maybe its just me ^^; Keep up the great work!!
Wow! I can't believe how horrable Cid's father was! Trying to "beat the gay" out of him! Thats horrable! :( Vincent's personality deffinitly seemed a bit differnt in the last sex sceane.. but maybe its just me ^^; Keep up the great work!!