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for Shattered Ice Redux

by Crya2Evans

person Psycho Demon Witch
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
She's never seen a Cid/Vincent pairing where Vincent was seme... it's rather strange...

He's rather a git to treat Cid that way, and she hopes he comes to his senses soon. She loves this, it's getting so much more interesting since the last time she saw it... which was quite some time ago...

Please update!!
person elfwench
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked how Cid leaped to Vincent's defense when Barrett accused him of being a spy. I liked the talk with Nanaki too. That lion-wolf is to observant for most people's comfort it seems. Hey! Happy Holidays all!
person margyy
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Margyy: It’s not really a chapter in particular. I was stuck on Chapter 9 which was originally Chapter 11, but things are moving right along. For Shattered Dreams I’ve stalled on Chapter 61 but as with all things, I’ll move past that. I’ll see where I can stick in more Cid and Reeve. Thanks!!
Awww ok, I see ^^ Good luck with getting past it with ch.61!! More Cid & Reeve would be nice :D ~Anyways, great chapter (as usuall ^^) But I was kinda confused by Renos line "Reeve hadn’t been the only spy." I don't think your refering to Tifa, cause Reno wouldn't care about her.. hmm >_<
person margyy
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
umm whoops! Sorry I didnt meant to leave in your response to me in the last comment, i put it in there so I could look at it while commenting back ^^;;
person z32
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the date in the golden saucer!! that was so cute! I really like your story, but just a suggestion: could you concentrate more in the cid/vincent relation? please don't take this as an offense, it's a nice thing you engulf all the characters, but the story it's starting to shift in other direction rather than the relation of these two, please? I want to know what will happen between them!
person margyy
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Weee~~ good chapter ^^ heeh Yuffie using Red as a pillow is cute :P What chapter you haveing problems with? :(
And that would be great if you did add more CidxReeves dialoge ^_^
person margyy
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just read your last response to my review, and yeah I really like that your showing more of Cid and Reeves friendship ^_^ I remember in the original, Yuffie seemed to be the only one who really got along with/ pay attention to Reeves? Well, until Reno came along. You should totally add more dialoge and or scenes between Cid and Reeves, right now they should kinda be like old friends reminising, ya'know? Oh yes! and the bit of forshadowing with Tifa's response to Reeves, that was neat, anyways, Im all caught up with your work, so I can enjoy it more now, whoohoo! ^_^ and Cid si very optimistic! Usually ;)
person Elfwench
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When Cid made that remark about thinking Vince was a woman I got the image of Vince punching him square in the nose. I laughed and now people are staring at me....I'm in the library....Sorry I'm late, got moved to a new shift so I'm adjusting to it.
person Elfwench
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like how it was Vincent of all people in the group was the one to offer a kind word to Cait Sith. He's the last person you'd expect that from.
person Elfwench
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
After successfully catching the old man with Vincent reminding himself he was not allowed to strangle the ghosts of the Ancients" *Snicker,* I like that....I wanted to murder the old geezer to when I went through that part of the game myself. I could see Aeris casting stop and running off myself. All caught up now and looking forward to more!

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