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I absolutely love it, a bit cliche, but hey thats why it was so great, nice change you did there, I though Cloud was gonna kill Sephiroth.
it's like the fifth time I say, it amazing story!!!
Can't wait to read the epiloge, what's gonna happen to poor Vince and Cid?
keep up the great job!!

If you killed off vincent I'll cry.

*is tormented* Q,Q

Loved it.... and hated it... both equally... no happy ending as of right now...

Though I only say hated it in the sense that Vincent sacrificed himself like that. Poor guy's been through hell and back and doesn't get any happy ending. But with that (which I kind of expected someone to not make it, although I was holding out hope it wasn't going to be Vincent) I also loved this chapter because you just sent the angst counter through the roof and left me hanging so horribly. Q,Q Gods, I hope he gets spit out by the lifestream or something... I need something to counteract the angst overload...

Oh, I know...

I'll go watch Capt. Murphy murder some flashlights... while I eat some pudding...

But before that, 'Baal' - OMG I totally pictured Prinny Baal fighting with Chaos, cuz I'm a Disgaea freak like that. ^_~ I'm seriously intrigued by that new addition and MUST see where you're going with it! Yes, obviously got to be in the sequel... and you can't (and I mean this with the fury of a thousand suns) just put forth all this incredible foreshadowing that must be leading up to something big and just leave me wondering! I must know!! I must!!! >,< And thus, UPDATE SOON! Now, some Sealab~

zomg it's so damn thrilling!! XD

;_;
That chapter was so sad! Ahh, I hope Vincent comes back *sniffle*
Poor Cid..I keep thinking back to that part when he was in his house alone..and I was hoping for a happy ending.

You wrote the battle scene quite well, I definitely agree that writing so many people into an action sequence is really hard. Some of the characters were semi-ignored, but it's not too bad...and you're going back over it so it's all good :3

I can't wait for the epilogue/sequel!

For some reason, this battle didn't seem as engaging as the Zombie Dragon or Tonberry/Malboro fights, but it's still good all the same. However, to see the ENTIRE PARTY in action together was definitely cool. For once, I'd like an FF game where you can use everybody at the same time.

The only real problems I could see was there was a time when you referred to Jenova as it and then started using her, but then again, it may be a more appropriate prounoun for her when you think about it, and the Brothers are named Sacred and Minotaur, but like you said, you didn't really remember and came up with your own version.

I did think it was the end! I was hesitant to click, but i am glade i did. You tease!


Wonderful yet again.

Chaos is going to eat them all. He wants out so badly. ;_;

Dang, I need to do the final battles again, I've forgotten most of battles and such. Wonderfully written as always, and I don't want Chaos to eat Cid's soul.. or liver, well not eat more than rip to shreds and turn back into Vincent so he can find his lover's remains caked under his fingernails, sorta evil.

Another awesome chapter :D
I always thought of Tonberrys as kind of cute..but after reading this, I think you're right. They are totally evil little bastards! XD
I thought you did a great job of writing both battles scenes at once, I think you're getting better and better at it :3
Also, I can safely say that I really have no idea what is going to happen next.

No, I have no bloody idea what's going to happen! ^_^o And I like it that way!

I must tell you though, I squealed in delight when you busted out the tonberries!! Oh gawd how I adore them~ ♥

Your battle scenes truly are top notch and I'm highly interested in the route you're taking with the summons. It baffles me to no end what you've got in store with them or for them. They are obviously a great part of the plot with the foreshadowing going on, but what exactly? No friggin’ clue on my part~

The biggest thing for me is that usually I'm pretty apt at deducing where a certain plot point is going. In this case though, I'm so stumped it's eating away at my brain... literally making me go: LET'S FIGURE IT OUT!! But then I come up with nothing and feel my brain cells dying as they overload and turn to mush.

And you probably have NO idea just how happy that makes me! So many plots are entirely contrived and even though I may enjoy a fic [or book]; when I know where an author is going it sucks a lot of the fun out of reading. In this case, I NEED to know what's going to happen and it's making me check back more often than I normally would. Let's just say, if this was a published book I had in my possession, I wouldn't have put it down until I was finished with it. Would have skipped work and pulled all nighters until I turned the last page of it. That is just my testament to how DAMN GOOD this fic is!

And now, that I have babbled too much, I leave you with the customary: update soon please!! ^_^