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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh the plot has som real potential and seems interesting and I think the writing itself is pretty good =)but there are a lot of misspellings and grammar errors in the summary so I suggest you correct them. I´m curious about where this is going and about the pairing ^_^ (Is it yaoi?=D) and is the prisoner anyone of the SHM? Heh guess I have to wait and see *grins*
Oh and remember; don´t be discouraged because of lack of reviews, hey you have to start somewhere?;)+ it shouldn´t be about how many people reviewed this story, it should be about your love for writing( remember that!) =D and since you posted here, I´m guessing you at least enjoy writing fanfics right?^_^ so keep writing! Good Luck!
Cloka
Oh and remember; don´t be discouraged because of lack of reviews, hey you have to start somewhere?;)+ it shouldn´t be about how many people reviewed this story, it should be about your love for writing( remember that!) =D and since you posted here, I´m guessing you at least enjoy writing fanfics right?^_^ so keep writing! Good Luck!
Cloka