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I will also never look at Oreo cookies the same again. xD

Very nicely written - loved the incorporation of the oreos in the sex scene. :P I can only imagine watching little Nero licking the cream out of an oreo cookie. >D Mmmmm...yum.

I must say I heart the final piece. It flows nicely and leave the sweet feeling behind. It's better when you have an Oreo while reading this. XD Did I mention I love Nero's "Nii-san"? Can't help it, just love when he said it ingame. But can't deny his Eng's "brother" too. So I think I like them both. And you just use them both, soo....

You'll have to forgive me - this review will be a lot of what I posed on the forum.

I think it flowed nicely. The actiony bits were great (I suck at those). Seriously... I think I can only get to romantic bits 'okay' but you got it all. I thought about the cookie eating from each others mouths myself... but damn... now I'll never look at an oreo the same way. hehe.

Just another compliment: you make Weiss so much sweeter than I can - I always make him such a mean tease! Also, you give him a kind of kitty-cat like feel to him (not sure if it was intentional or not). When he was screaming for Nero I could imagine a kitty caterwauling for it's mate. I'm glad you figured out a way for Nero to reveal himself without being too silly - so cute!

Great job! You get a cookie! =D

This fic was absolutely adorable! Nice idea with the Oreos. Yum! I hope to read more of your writing since it's so good. Hail Weiss!

I love the oreos and how you effectively use them! Love the kinkyness! I will be looking forward to your next fanfic.