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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow amazing! absolutely love your writing! I didn't even consider this pairing really.....but that was hot. please continue!^^
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH I love it just as much as I love Balthier! You should continue this it is cute yet also extremely erotic!!!!!
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Been playin' FFXII recently and was a little shocked to see there really weren't any very distinct pairings, but then I realized that that just a really good excuse for fanfiction writers to fill in the gaps. The story was really good, but I was wondering if maybe you add more chapters...I'd love to more about the Ashe/Vaan situation.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The abortion spell. Interesting. Penelo should ask Balthier if he's ever heard of a condom.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't really like this pairing, but this is some of the best het FFXII smut I've come across so far.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am utterly satisfied! This is the best fanfic I've read in a long time. Sexy but not vulgar, well-written and in character, incredibly romantic - bravo!!!
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. Very, very nice. They also seemed relatively in-character, which is also nice.