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July 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED this! There aren't enough fanfics of YunaXKimahri that are actually good! Too many are gangbang/rape fics. The simple affection you put into your version is much welcomed. I know it's been a couple years at this point since ya wrote this, but a continuation would be wonderful!
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June 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Furry hotness. Love it! I also like that you kept his member animal-like, not saying it looked just like a human's. Much more authentic description.
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October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very sexy, and well written. Believable with the characters involved which is something I prize highly. All in all, an excellent fic. Keep writing!
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I deffinatly enjoyed this story, although I think Kimari would have been bigger than 8". I would like to see one whare Yuna is ganbanged by all the Gullwings except Shinra, as well as Kimari and Garik Ronso. I want Paine and Rikku to use strap ons, and I want all her holes filled at once. I wang Garik to ass rape her (well I want all of it to be rape). and here's the kicker: I want it to fit into the storyline, and be at least 10 pgs long. Think you can do it?
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. I think it's an interesting thing, and I would like to see more, but that's up to you. Either way, keep up the great work!
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting for a Yuna/Khimari fic for too long! Well done! I think you managed to do something that I could never hope with my fics, to actually keep the people in character while still doing something that seems out of character. As I said before, well done, and if you want to write another chapter, I'll sooo be reading it!