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That was very well done. I totally empathize with Cloud. It's tough when you get into a situation that you don't want on an intellectual level but need greatly on a physical level. You worked it beautifully.

i can't wait to read more ^^ It seems promising, although I don't like CloudSephiroth paiting if Cloud isn't the seme :) But well, I like this one. I would like to know more about the empty days and how Cloud fills them

I don't know if I should scream or cry. I totally love your story, but it drives me crazy when Cloud is always manipulated like that. Hasn't he suffered enough? Sephiroth is my favorite character, but in this story, I just want to tear his hair out! lol... I do love your story, don't get me wrong, but Sephiroth is so brilliantly written that I can actually see that happening, but it still pisses me off that Cloud's weakness is exploited and takes great pleasure in seeing someone so strong being reduced to that.

I love it to pieces, and I'm going to torture myself by reading more...hopeful soon. lol

Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!
please continue!!
you have my utmost support!!!

Wow. That was just... creepy. I hope things will liven up in this mansion.

May I suggest something. You wrote, "A day hadn't went by where". Perhaps you should substitute 'went' with gone. It would make the flow of words better. ;)

FINALLY!!!

A story where Cloud is actually fighting back! I was getting disheartened with all those stories where Cloud just gives in to Sephiroth's demands. A strong Cloud in a fic is a great read. Can't wait to read more

Oh my - Cloud's in for it now. Eternity? Well, at least he has the time needed to figure out a plan. Sometimes all you need is time.

I Love SephirothxCloud Fics with plots like this! I look forward to the next chapter!

sounds good so far. i'm looking forward to reading more :)

Hot, hot, HOT! Iève been waiting for a story like this for years! Really! Please update, with all the mind-fucking Sephiroth will do to have Cloud as his!