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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eeeee, that was so adorable!! I'm only up to chapter two at the moment, but I just wanted to comment while I could. That and to say I always laugh when I see your screen name. It's so creative! So much so that it inspired me to draw, and I'd be honored if you took a look! It's here: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/44807802/
Please keep on writing!
Please keep on writing!
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You say you feel bad for writing a chapter like this, but I must be even a worse person because I absolutely loved it!
Very well put together, action, dialogue all great. You can really feel the power dynamic between Weiss and Restrictor. And the thing about the kitten, that was so sad :( Restrictor is truly evil.
The ending was done so sweetly as well. Can't wait to read the final chapter that ties it all up. ^_^
Very well put together, action, dialogue all great. You can really feel the power dynamic between Weiss and Restrictor. And the thing about the kitten, that was so sad :( Restrictor is truly evil.
The ending was done so sweetly as well. Can't wait to read the final chapter that ties it all up. ^_^
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Looks like it's off to a great start so far! I just love how you have them dancing around each other, they both want the same thing, but don't want to mess up what they already have.
Looking forward to reading more, even if it is *ahem* a bit disturbing.
Looking forward to reading more, even if it is *ahem* a bit disturbing.