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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was cute. There were a few overlooked grammar errors though, but well written other than that. Most people on this site put their noses up at OC characters, always pointing the 'Mary Sue' finger, but I don't mind OC's myself. I wasn't aware that fanfiction.net didn't allow adult material. Hmmm. Anyway, I liked it.