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for Exquisite Dysfunction

by SyntheticHigh

person Mira
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You. Are. Evil. But. So. AWESOME!

I loved this! It was cute and sexy and I want more. You have it on LJ? Oooh LiveJournal is the best! Well...not really...but I like it! I have one, but of course I have everything...

As I was saying, Jiro and Sephy PRICELESS!!! Did not see that coming. The entire display amused the hell out of me.

Usually I'm not so fond of MPreg...but whatever.

You say the next part is better?...*nuzzles up to you* -^-^- you're my beeest friiiend...
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like I like I like! Man so far so good!!!!
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol Cloud is soo cute! but I um..I liked the first chapter better, I just hope be are more serious in up coming chapters!
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sorry but I thought this would be better
person MayaKazume
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am loving your story, please update soon! And how long is it going to take Zack and Cloud to get together?
And what happens to Jiro and Sephy?
Thank you, you are a really great writer.
person Mira
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE IT ENDED

The part about the "kiss" was a bit unclear, Jiro is a mean and evil bastard, AMG LOVE FOR ZACK AND AERITH, aaand...I forgive the not-100-percent-ness because y'all were sick. It was still pretty good...okay...and maybe later you can beta it again?

Until then, <333 cain't wait fa more
person Tak
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'll make an exquisitely helpful comment :
Nice ! Go on !!
person Mira
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*squee* I was noted!...And yes, you most definitely are!! THIS WAS HILARIOUS!! I LOVE THEM!! YOUR CO-WRITER IS AMAZING!! As is Zack, of course.

Vincent is mad sexy (*is in love with him*), that one line was hilarious, and now I want more more than ever.

Very sweet. I liked the dancing bit. And the "Bitch Fight". I can tell this is going to be a very sweet fic I can't get enough of! As for ideas...I have none, sadly. If I did, I'd let you know. I'm sure you'll do fantastically.

...As long as you don't take forever to update O___O;;;

<333, luff for best bud =D XDDD
person Artemis
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice...udpate soon

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