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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmmm...
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT!!!! Reno fucking Cloud!!! Oh, hot damn! *needs a shower* I don’t see that much! This was really enjoyable *nods, nods*
Reno: Yeah, so follow what she’s doing.
*kicks my muse*
My Cloud’s not so willing to my Reno.
I love this alot, can’t wait for the next update!!!
Reno: Yeah, so follow what she’s doing.
*kicks my muse*
My Cloud’s not so willing to my Reno.
I love this alot, can’t wait for the next update!!!
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love, love, love. I want more. Eeek! The make-out scene between Cloud and Reno was so sweet, and long anticipated. And gosh to goodness, you had so many clever lines in here that cracked me up. I was nearly crying, it was so funny.
Tifa's smile faded. "Why are you watching him, Reno? You practically dog his every step."
"The truth? I have no fucking clue."
And lines like that...Wow. You've got Reno's character down pat. Cloud, I'm not so sure. He started off great, but he becomes so talkative later. Do you think he'd really talk so much, even if he was falling in love with someone? And he seemed unusually bold to initiate that kiss with Reno. I thought Cloud was more shy than that. It was difficult to tell exactly when the two of them started becoming attracted to each other, too. You did explain it a little bit, but it didn't seem sufficient. You'd think there'd be more absent-minded gazing in the beginning. Or something.
Anyway, regardless of those things that I'm not entirely sure I agree with, I loved this story and I love you for writing it. Please, pretty please, update it soon, okay?
Tifa's smile faded. "Why are you watching him, Reno? You practically dog his every step."
"The truth? I have no fucking clue."
And lines like that...Wow. You've got Reno's character down pat. Cloud, I'm not so sure. He started off great, but he becomes so talkative later. Do you think he'd really talk so much, even if he was falling in love with someone? And he seemed unusually bold to initiate that kiss with Reno. I thought Cloud was more shy than that. It was difficult to tell exactly when the two of them started becoming attracted to each other, too. You did explain it a little bit, but it didn't seem sufficient. You'd think there'd be more absent-minded gazing in the beginning. Or something.
Anyway, regardless of those things that I'm not entirely sure I agree with, I loved this story and I love you for writing it. Please, pretty please, update it soon, okay?
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! The ending just made laugh so hard! I almost choked on my coffee!!
Damn, that was good. I don’t see Reno being the seme much with Cloud. He is the seme right? XD, it seems it. Update soon!
Damn, that was good. I don’t see Reno being the seme much with Cloud. He is the seme right? XD, it seems it. Update soon!
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January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Reno, he always seems to get the worse, don't he :/? Aww, it's cute though.
Good update.
Good update.
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January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!! ;) Veyr nice job!
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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is one of the best Advent Children fics I've read (and I've read a lot of them). I can't wait to see what happens next.
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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting so far. I’m totally loving your characterizations.
Before the big man could reply Cloud stood between them with his back to Reno and a fistful of the man's shirt.
"Stand down, Duncan," Cloud ordered. "There's not going to be any trouble here tonight."
AWW!! I really thought that was cute!!