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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
5 Stars! You should be at 5. You got 5 from me.
Wonderful job of tapping into the personality of Hojo. You convey his dialog, personality, thoughts, and thought process so perfectly.
You make him seem 'real', it is eerie in a way. In a good way. Basically you make your reader see and feel what is going on.--I cringed for the specimen on the table. That is a what a gifted writer pulls off and does to their readers. As you did to me.
I definitely want to see/read more of this. PLEASE (you know I rarely ask a writer to update) UPDATE SOON!
~Tainted
Wonderful job of tapping into the personality of Hojo. You convey his dialog, personality, thoughts, and thought process so perfectly.
You make him seem 'real', it is eerie in a way. In a good way. Basically you make your reader see and feel what is going on.--I cringed for the specimen on the table. That is a what a gifted writer pulls off and does to their readers. As you did to me.
I definitely want to see/read more of this. PLEASE (you know I rarely ask a writer to update) UPDATE SOON!
~Tainted