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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty nice start. Good job on the writing/formatting, as well as character development. Looking forward to a bit more action, hope it comes soon!
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good story. I love the character developement you have here. And is it just me or is nearly every guy getting interested in cloud? Not that I mind. And don't make Reno a one legged Hobo!
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good. A little strange at some parts, but overall good. If you wrote more, I would read it.
-.~LabyrinthMoonPath
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm reviewing this cause I luv ya and I really do think that this is developing into quite the story. You're a good writer and keep it up, I'm sure many people are dying to see what happens next between Cloud and Zack.