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Zack x Cloud is my favourite pairing, and I've spent a lot of time looking for a LONG fic with lots of chapters that deals with the idea of this fic. (Where Zack lives and he and Cloud get to enjoy each other in many ways as though they were both part of the original game).

So far I like this one, please keep writing.

Haha, I'm actually registered on ff.net, but their server is down right now so I couldn't look for this fic on there and review on that one. Anyways, it was really cute...and I love all of your A/Ns in there...very funny side comments. But...to honestly say, I seriously don't like Sephiroth and Cloud....T_T I much prefer Sephiroth and Zack, I think they'd make a much cuter couple...though I love this could too!! =D

I remember reading somewhere in your A/N that Zack was your fav character....O_o...he's one of my top 3 characters! xD

Strife-lover (that's my name on ff.net though I don't write and final fantasy fics...haha)

Like where you're going! More, please?

"Zack said, his voice cool, it seemed," - it only SEEMED to be cool, it secretly wasn't though.


It wasn’t his first time being kissed but at least it was consensual (Wut does THAT mean?!). - I know what that means. I found out last night while I was making it true.

Zack kissed Cloud’s cheek softly but consecutively at least 8 times - Simultaniously for two years!


Soon Zack pushed himself away, smiling sleazily, drool falling out of his mouth and into Cloud’s. - I like that mental picture....(me too)

Raiden: okie!! (strips) Look! I'm naked!!! - The saf thing is ... it's in his personality.

Bye. Bye. I'll see you in about two seconds when I turn to me left. unless if I melt of course.

Girl... you are insane ¬¬

When does the action start, if you know what I mean? ^_~

I LOVE this story. Zack is definately my favorite character and his personallity is dead on in my opinion. My favorite part was when Cloud protected Zack from Barret. I was jumping up in down, it was awesome. I hope you'll post again soon and keep up the great work.

Noooo, moooooooooore!! ;-; That was the best-est story I've ever read that didn't show any yaoi action yet! I demand more! ~Gives you sugar cookies~ Please? ("')^o^('")~

My only complaint is that this chapter is too short, but if it means they are posted more often than it's a small price to pay! :) And there's nothing wrong about delving into a character's thoughts. In my humble opinion, knowing what a character is thinking is essential to a story like this, particularly this chapter where there is minimal dialogue between the characters. Just think of it as "internal dialogue".

Besides, how else are we to know how Zack and Cloud feel about one another?

Hello,and thanks for add another chap.
First you story is great,really!! and of course many of us would like Zack to live,he is one of the truly forgotten heros of the whole plot,i mean he saved little Cloud from the lab tank,he fought Seph!!hell,his my favourite!!(¨^_^) i know you must know that too) but my point is:Go! Go! and write whatever you want,i´ll support you.
bye