rate_review Reviews

just for the record, cloud is adorable. lol and his stiry is adorable too. :) bu yeah, i've never played ff7 so i don't know who zack is, but i do know the rest of everyone, though zack does sound like a lovely character indeed. :) also, i don't believe that you ramble too much. i thin the story flowed rather nicely.

I'm absolutely loving it so far, though I'm a little curious to know why you tacked on "Silly Thoughts" at the end of the title. The only silliness I've come across so far is Zack's usual exuberant behavior...and Barrett. For whatever reasons he makes me laugh, shake my head, or both.

I can't wait for the next chapter. Don't keep your readers in suspense for too long!

Very good job, Damon! I -love- stories involving Zack and Cloud ^^ and the scenes you write are very active. The way Zack and Cloud are so protective of each other is very sweet, and the conflict that Barret presents is very promising for interesting scenes. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the up-coming chapters. Please continue writing!

This is pretty good....I hope to read more in the future.