rate_review Reviews

good....up until they got the letter about cloud and tifa's marrge. i stopped at that exact spot.

OMGWTFBBQ.

...and here I thought I was going to get smexing ;_;

Please, please, PLEASE tell me you're going to write a sequel... and if you weren't planning on it I'll stalk you like whoa until you write more. omg omg omg omg omg. Please let Cid stay with Vincent despite Shera? ;_;

MY MY I SHOULDN'T HAVE DOUBTED YOU. BETTER THAN THE YOUNG AND THE RESTLESS. AND TO LEAVE ON A CLIFFHANGER MYMY. IDO HOPE THIS DOESN'T END UP IN A THREEWAY LOVEFEST. YOU KNOW WHAT THEY SAY ABOUT A WOMAN SCORNED. CAN'T WAIT TILL THE SEQUEL.

First let me begin by saying how much I've been enjoying your story, but I believe the last two chapters especially the most recent chapter are a bit schizophrenic and a little bit of a cop out. I'm all for the whole cidxvince romance but not addressing the fact that 1) cid is cheating on his wife....2) making shera out to be a bitch because she suspects her man is cheating and 3) having vincent confront the situation only to have him do a complete 180 is sloppy writing and not up to the standards you have kept so far. even if it takes a few more chapters i think your story deserves a truer and more complicated resolution. keep up the good work and don't sell yourself or your story short.

*squeals* Angst going into kissing always, always makes me happy. I cannot wait until you post the smex-filled next bit! :D

Yay! That's what I'm talkin about!

Nice chapter, good way to incorporate songs and such. It was a nice touch without being overpoweringly songficish. And, while I'm sure Cid was a scary sight for a moment, it was cute when they came together again. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oooooooh, angst. I can't wait to see what'll happen when Shera DOES find out... but I'll probably stop reading this story if it turns out Cid ditches Vincent for Shera. -frowns- Valenwind is better, plzthx. And your Cid-'n'-Vin are cute together.

Gah!

They can't just break up like that! :O Screw Shera. She's just a lousy screw-up anyway. Vincent needs teh lovez from Cid! :)

I was ecstatic to see two chapters more, and they're wonderful, albeit a little depressing and definitely not what I expected. Every relationship has its ups and downs, though, I suppose.

Hurry and update before I die of anticipation haha.

UPDATE. YAY. Squeee. That last chapter made me laugh so hard at times.

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!! I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!