rate_review Reviews

YAY!! Angeal finally gets some action as well! Very nice, these three, yum yum!

heheheh luvs!! i thought it was really funny how it took zack a while to figure out they were talking about sex. <.< i got it right a way like im sure alot if readers did and it amused me much! XD great work! i love your stuff XD

Definitely Yummy...one is fun...but two is even better...Ah Lucky Zack!

Mitts

Oh, I like the ideal of more...lol
The only thing I will point out, (mind your own business Penny)is that, during the story, you tell how Sephiroth completely removes Zacks trousers....but then, after Seph has given Zack pleasure, you say that Seph 'tucks' him back in, which implies Zack still has his trousers on, just undone..
Just a little thing I noticed, thats all...

Oh my God! That was so incredibly erotic and...cute. It feels so wrong to have read this during the day! ;) And to leave it where you did! You're one of those sadistic writers, aren't you? You MUST write a sequel. I'm not even above begging: PLEASE PLEASE write a sequel! Grr. You can't leave it that way!

I'm going to go sulk now, but at least I'll be doing it with a discreet smirk on my face. Well done!