rate_review Reviews

Ahh, you ended the story just like it was supposed to be ^^ Loved it!
Holy Fuck! You actually used one of his famous dialogues:
I want you to beg for forgivenessXD but yours was mixed in the yaoi way but still! God
Final Fantasy is full of hidden Yaoi signalsXD I mean come on?!
Oh fuck this fic is definitly the real god: Sephiroth *bow*
Huh don't you mean Zack Fair?
Or Is it a mix of Laguna Loire and Zack Fair? *laugh*
Hey! why are you acting so mean with Reno the whole time!?XD
Don't you like him?! I mean in the other fic Reno didn't get laid and here you are being mean to himXD
I love Reno :3 and Axel XD =D

It's a shame it had to end that way, i could easily see love in what they had together. Very well written, my favourite pairing though it's hard to find stories and suchforth about them. Explosive sex scenes, very descriptive, very hot.

i wish this were true...except the whole sephy-going-crazy thing... and if this happens, what happens to tseng when the remnants capture and torture him and elena? since he was sephiroth's lover, would they be jealous and hurt him more or something else?

i like this story though!
ASOTA

this was good. ^^ I'd love to see it continued, but you'd probably have to rewrite some of the game unless you did it as an alternate ending for AC. Hmm. Just thinking to myself, ignore me. XD

Oh god. So good. This is always my favorite pairing, coming to a close second with Tseng/Reno/Tseng. I love how you give Sephiroth depth and how you create Tseng's character. Both are wonderful in this fiction, and of course, we can't ignore your complete, and total talent when it comes to writing.

Your description is perfect and beautiful, and of course, your vocabulary is stunning.

Great job!

Damn Hojo-Please have Tseng save Septh....I love how these guys can not get enough but when you had said spanking it was just the little slaps on butt. Where was pure smacking for the whining or the pouting or being difficult that I was sorely wrong about? I'm sorry I'm demanding but you have me hooked.

Fabulous sex scenes with good writing, I'd like to read more.

Hot sexy Sephiroth...he could turn on just about anybody. Its a wonder the man doesn't have "People" Standing out side of his office with bakery numbers# waiting to be fucked by him. LOL I do him anytime. Kind makes you wonder when he has time to fight with that big giant sword of his!

Write More, G

I like it. Very hot sex scenes, and nice personlities. I suggest you look over your chapters, especially chapter 2, because there are quite a few spelling errors there. Otherwise, hot, please continue.

So brutal, but so damn hot. That was one of the more awesome sex scenes I've read recently. Great description. Interesting pair as well. Great job, and I'll look forward to the updates.

Oh yes! you have people interested,of course!!! so please continue it, and update soon
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