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I have been looking for stories from efics since the site went down and now I found one of my favorites from the site. I am currently on chapter 12 and I LOVE YOU FOR THIS!!! Each of the characters are awesomely written and beautifully developed as the plot continues/thickens. Zach and Jeh-ri smoking a joint at the beginning of the chapter was hilarious and Jeh-ri locking Seph out LOL!!! I am so glad this story is posted here and that I found it yesterday as there are many others I am still looking for. At least I found one of my favorites and I'm loving it. You do need a beta for the story (I'm available but I have never played FF if thats ok) I have more to read and I'll review again later! ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!

Ganbatte!!

Siryn

I've been reading this (and loving it, by the way!) for a while, but AFF was eating my login, and wouldn't let me leave a review.
One thing I've noticed, and it's a little bit annoying is there are a lot of incorrect homonyms, words with similar sounds/spellings and words that don't fit within the context....Little things like "there" instead of "their", "where" instead or "were" or "we're", "you're" where you mean "your", that sort of thing....all throughout. I think a beta reader would be a help, so would spellcheck.net, though in truth, there aren't that many mispellings.

Thank you!! I am so pleased I got another review! This is the first ever fic I wrote in English and it does contain a fair amount of grammar and spelling issues, but I will pull the chapters and clean them up. I am still writing on it, dont you worry. thanks for the review, it really means a lot to me!
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Please keep writing!!:D You're work is wonderful to get lost in... the characters come alive and the storyline is great...keep up the great work, you've got a fan here!!!