rate_review Reviews

I love this story so much! I think it's incredibly hot and very clever - I would totally see Seifer having that kind of crush on Irvine and behaving just like that, and the very idea of him coming to a seduction-master Zell in such a situation is priceless. Everytime I read it over again, I wish you'd write a sequel about how Seifer seduces Irvine, possibly in an Irvine point-of-view.

Anyway thanks for the awesome story :)

Awesome. You should keep this going.

I do hope there's a next chapter to this brilliant voyeuristic masterpiece?
Cowboy and Mr Ego. Ooofff!

Ooh, sexy! It's nice to see Seifer as something other than the know-it-all seme, and I love the fact that he had to ask Zell for his help. ^_^ I didn't notice if this was supposed to be a one-shot, or if it was going to be continued... but I would love to see Seifer put his lesson into practice!

OMG! totaly noose bleed worthy! This was hot and funny!I realy liked this! *grinning* I can't wait till the update!

Like to pacing - nicely teasing, highly erotic!!! More, please!!!

you write very well! i am very impressed, especially on the listing of tricks down below, if you worked that out yourself, id hate to be in the same room with you.. i hope you'll let seifer put his gained knowledge to work!