rate_review Reviews

I like it. It's definately different, I'll give ya that. But somehow it's hard to picture Vinny as an 'evil' vampire. And I LOVE that you have Genesis in this.

You have a good concept going on here, and I'll be sure to keep reading this. It's an interesting new take on Vincent. Only suggestion I can make is to be sure that you stick to one type of writing style (just for consistences sake). You had a moment in the first chapter (the Tifa part) that sounded more, matter of fact, or like a synopsis of the situation, rather than an actual telling of the story. You quickly recovered from it and carried on.


Again I look forward to reading more!