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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dont worry about your chapters being short! it makes it easier to work out the more subtle details of your plot, which by the way is getting very intreaging indeed!! like who is the girl with the purple hair, or is that someone you have added yourself? keep it up!!
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting what finish melo death metal can inspire someone to write :)
still interesting, though I´m suspecting mary-sue?
anyways, keep up the good work
still interesting, though I´m suspecting mary-sue?
anyways, keep up the good work
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is very interesting so far! please continue
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me like.. me like very much!! i do want to find out what yazoo has in store for himself, and i am looking forward to reading another chapter about 'Mini-roth' <^-^>