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for Sins Forgiven

by horrorgal

schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im not a big fan of the pairing but goodness you may just turn me into one with this! Nice work!
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
too much angst and WAFF can get annoyin ya, but there wasn't enough of either in here to really take away from the fic. I though what you had going worked well, and i liked it. I hope ya write more with these two, never considered it before, but you've made it work.

Good Job and good writin
person Anon
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i've heard people debating whether vincent's gauntlet is to cover up a deformity as a result of the experiments conducted on his body, but i'd always assumed it was just part of his goth outfit lol!

as for the story, hot hot hot girl! i loved it! i don't mind the angst. vincent is a silent brooding (and smexy) angst-ball after all, it wouldn't do not to throw just a little in there ;) you probably know this LOL but cloud and vincent are deffo my 2 fave male characters from FF hehe so seeing them together is a definitely plus! i luv cloti too, but they're so hot together *shiver* yessssss!

great job 5 stars! =D
person squeaker
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woooohoooo! I loved it. That was a great story and I love that pairing also. Thanks for sharing.
person crutland
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, I love this pairing also
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Perfect! I can't say more than that really. I've always thought of Vincent and Cloud together - even when I was first playing the game all those years ago. They happen to be one of my favorite pairings. They just work together ya know? Wonderful job sweetie - you made me squirm in my seat.
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*applause* bravo. The first Vincent/Cloud fic I've really REALLY enjoyed. Don't get me wrong, there are some good ones but this one was by far the best written of the one's I've read. I like your take on the gauntlet. They never really do tell you if it's attached or not. I know alot of people were as relieved as I was at the end of AC when Cloud wasn't as Emo... I know he went through alot... but that was still annoying ;P. Loved the fic!!! well done!

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