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person KorNaXon
schedule November 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy I found this story, no matter it's unfinished. I ship this pairing very hard, and this fic about them is so perfect!
I know you wrote this a long time ago and there's no chance for sequel and maybe you won't even read my words. I just wanted to say thank you. This story made my day! It has so many components I like to fancy in their relationship: the fighting, the secret attraction, drama, tragedy, redemption, teasing, hot and steamy sex, sadness, fluff, love, playfulness and humor. Great job indeed. I love it.
person Hakucho
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh oh oh oh oh... I didn't know you wrote this. I was surprised to find it! *Drooling* I love the emotions in this story and the erotica. Weeeeeeeee..... *pants* I wan't a wanting Yazoo too. :)

Many hugs my sweetness and hope to talk to you soon.
person dorei-sama
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww now i want to hug loz, poor guy. I'm glad he's not dead though he's pretty cool. I'm glad u saved Yazoo, he's swwwweeeeet. hope u come out with a new chapter soon, plz feel free to email me at akylahkellmaru@aol.com when you do so I have the heads up. thx.
person Anon
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY!!!!
ASOTA
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have a new favorite pairing. XDD
Yazoo and Cloud are SO sweet (Is that the word I'm looking for?*) together.
[They just seem, so... soft together. I think because I've never really pictured either of them as dominant. ^^]

::squeak.:: I can't wait for more.
person nur
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, i loved it!!! please continue this wonderful story!

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