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Like always i love your storys , and im so happy that i randomly came upon another one of your works , about the ending i would have liked to see it continued but i suppose that if you don't really feel like doing it it's better if you just leave it as it is ^_^ no use in continueing something you have no passion to continue ; anyway keep me updated with your fanfics i just love your writing style.
Rinoa

Hey !

Well, you chose an end, after all, didn't you? :p

I was so thrilled to see the update !

Well, loved it, as usual. The "Squall/Cloud" confrontation was very intense. You handled it very well.
I love your Reno; he makes me laugh. At times, I even wondered if he didn't pull the strings so that Cloud and Squall would break up... I don't know. Funny though.

Well, now, on with your next fanfic you wouldn't talk to me about (and our doujin :p)

Hey you ^^

Nice one too ^^ I pity Squall, actually... his feelings seem deep enough.Pity Cloud too, cause he suffers more from keeeping it all bottled up, and by lying to cloud, and by postponing the time he'll really hurt Squall...
Reno XD

Definately should make more chapters for this one...!!! Cloud and Zack stories are great but a triangle with Squall?....this is one interesting plotline here!!!! Keep up the great work!!!!!

Hey miss ^^

Waah... Wonderful, as always. I so fucking love you XD
And wow, Reno is an absolute arse. And I love him too XD
And well, i usually don't like cheaters, but hey... love Cloud too.. and of course I love Zack. And well, poor Squall anyway.

And I love the end =D

(I love everybody. You made a fucking hippie out of me XDDD)

So so very good. Go on like this ^^

I really like this. Don't usually like fics with.. this sort of drama - but this is highly entertaining. Cloud's such a little sexpot in your fic, which makes me squeal with laughter. I hope everything turns out okay! But! Can't argue with a knock-down drag-out fight either!
Woooo! Keep writing! I'll be waiting!
-Savannah.

Wow, this was amazing. I honestly didn't expect that, I thought Cloud was just being insecure. O.o Bad Cloud for cheating! Though I don't think I'm alone when I say I can see why he did it.

Oh Hi!!! I didn't review this story from fanfiction.net but am doing it now.When I first read it I've got no time to make a decent commentary but I hope that you will get as many reviews as you like because as a matter of fact you are very, very good writer of fiction,actually, am completely in love with "Crystal Clear" and am dreading its end ¬¬...I don't want to re-read a "Zack's ending", not with your plot anyway(Which I may add its awsome ^^) and am truly sorry for Cloud right now...I wasn't before, but the way you put it all its simply heartwrenching, you hang me up since the begining and am stuck with you till the end.And oh! by the way...(low bow and pleading eyes afterward) add a few more chapters to this new one story?please!!
Anyway, thanks for standing annoying reviewers as myself ¬¬sorry! and nothing more.
bye

Omg! The interactions between the characters at the beginning crack me up!

"Zack couldn’t help the small smile that crept across his face at that bit of information. “Be right back,” he said to his friend with a wink before walking over to the bar counter where the cute blonde was located." Zack's getting his mack on! I could just imagine him jumping up and down with glee inside of his head when he found out Cloud and Yuffie weren't together.

Ah! Don't buy drinks for minors! Naughty Zack! ****Awww*** Zack caught in an awkward moment staring at Cloudie! /Sure/ he had a hard day!

Darn Yuffie for being paranoid... she knows what Zack really wants! Hehehe!

OMG! Zack approaching Cloud at his doorstep! SO, so... Yaoi! lol! Zack is so nervous = ULTRA CUTENESS! OMG rotf

"Did you want to come in?" Cloud you little horndog! "Want to see my room?" *slut* J/K...not~ Zack's so sweet~ Reno probably wouldn't have cared if he was drunk and Reno's my favorite!

Holy sh*t. The boyfriend. As in Cloud. Damn. O.O Great one-shot. Even greater if you had the time and will to turn it into a multi-chapter fic.

One incredibly minor "complaint": If this is FF8 Squall and not just some OC with his name, this piece would probably be better suited to the Kingdom Hearts section. From there, it would be EXTREMELY easy to explain away his presence (actually, you wouldn't necessarily have to even make one up--people would just accept it), whereas in the FF7 universe his appearance is more jarring and requires a more inventive excuse. Just a thought. Moving on . . .

*drools*

But I can't believe they only had sex once! What, one episode of intercourse for one drink? I mean, I'm not expecting a marathon, but at least a second round would have been fun. Cheapskate. XP I move to coerce you into more (though the next chapter of Crystal Clear will suffice)!

When I read 'Squall', I knew instantly that he and Cloud were together, but that didn't make it any less of an "Oh, ouch!" sort of twist. Well done, and I look forward to more from you, whatever form it may take. ^_^


~LS