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I could cry I'm so happy you updated. That tattoo is incredibly awesome, and those baby pictures are so cute!
The suspense over the Vincent thing is killing me.

I LOOOOOVVVEEE YOU!!!! I'm so glad you finally updated! <3<3<3 I can't wait to see what happens next, espcially since you stopped on a clif hanging >.<

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie

I'm so in love with this story!!! All the free time that I have, I run to my comp. to read it! This is the most lovely Sephiroth! He's fascinating, amazing how you managed to gather traces of the OC with a human version, sensitive and that makes me want to cuddle him and take him home! And I'm not so a Cloud's fan but he's so boldly sweet, impossible to not picture his face, mesmerized by his lover. Wonderful work dear and I do hope that you don't stop with this fic!
Hugs from Brazil

Wow. I made it to the end of chapter 20 tonight - it's such an awesome story, and there's always more and more of it - in a way, I'm not looking forward to catching up with the latest chapter, cause then the next one won't already be out there to read whenever, and it's so addictive. XD It's kind of amazing how you manage to include so many moments of warmth and love and maturity between those two while still making them way more flawed than they are in less effective fluff. Seems like the brattiness that got Cloud into an argument on the day Seph left and the hormones that got the better of him for a while there with Reno are both the sort of flaws that'll be mitigated as he learns more self discipline - he's chosen a career that's bound to help him grow.

This is the first story in a long time that's been able to work me up into semi-hysterical laughter. And I just fawkin love it. I adore the way you write Cloud—and Rufus. Rufus, Rufus, Rufus. Oh God I'll never look at that flaming bastard the same ever again.

Just one request—should you decide sometime in the future to start popping out little Cloudies and silver-haired monsters—can Cloud be the carrier? It's depressingly hard to find a good MPREG story and Cloud almost never is the one bemoaning swollen cankles. And I've already got the wonderful Kittens to satisfy my thirst for watching Sephiroth suffer through pregnancy.

But you follow your little muse wherever the fuck it takes you. I love this story and I'll be poking around anxiously waiting for more. Dunno if you have an email list for when you do update (damn AFF for their refusal to email me about updates) but I'm going to jot mine down.

mizu-benten@hotmail.com

Fantastic fanfic so far! I honestly laughed, cried, and smiled while reading this whole fic! The way you write just made me feel as if I was in the story, and following Cloud around as if I was his shadow! I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter update! :)

Hey! LOL FINALLY finished it! I'm a frickin' slow reader. Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope you update soon!!!!!!!! But I can only imagine writing such long chaps takes a while. Oh well, I'll be waiting!

Yay! I was so happy when I was sending the link of the story to a friend and noticed the new chapter. It was absolutely amazing as always. You always manage to make each and every chapter so unique and fulfilling. It never ceases to amaze me how colorful you write, I feel like I could walk in the world you create. It's so wonderful.

I loved it when Cloud slammed into the wall when he ran out of the room, because it's so silly and so REAL. His and Rufus' friendship is hilarious and Cam is just amazing.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

That chapter was amazing! Totally worth the wait. Gen and Ruf are just too cute together. Rufus reminds me of my best friend, who at 110lbs think he's fat. Seph totally is the Fonz. That line made me laugh hard ^_^

YOU are made of WIN!! xD For a moment there I thought someone was going to ruin their little backseat romp, glad that didn't happen. It was well worth the wait and of course as always, can't wait for the next installments...because I'm greedy like that yo. x3 ♥