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December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very hot! I love feisty Cloud! and I think maybe the other two brothers or Vincent! Update soon! Merry X-mas!
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I dont know about you guys but i cant wait for more of this story xD
Ive known some of the layout of events before it was written and yet im still blown away with it all
The setting, storyline, personality, everything is marked perfectly and not to mention its hot as fuck x///x
I especially love the detail and word choices of each scene, weither it be Loz's rough motions or Clouds fiery rebelling , either being incredibly rich with creativity and accuracy
All I know is I love this story and I need MOOOOOOOOOOORE
>x]
Ive known some of the layout of events before it was written and yet im still blown away with it all
The setting, storyline, personality, everything is marked perfectly and not to mention its hot as fuck x///x
I especially love the detail and word choices of each scene, weither it be Loz's rough motions or Clouds fiery rebelling , either being incredibly rich with creativity and accuracy
All I know is I love this story and I need MOOOOOOOOOOORE
>x]
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waaa! You've just updating it! \(^O^)/
Yaaaay! Okie perhaps this doesn't count as a review post XDXD And I haven't even read it XD
I'm so excited right now and am gonna start reading it! Just wanna say thank you for replying to me
and continuing this story! And yes please make the upcoming chapters with torture and sadism too XD
And yes I strongly agree! You can exactly read my mind! I'm also prefer macho tough ukes oh yeaay baby! XD
It's more sexy that way graaaawr! XDXD I don't like it when ppl portray Cloud as a whimpy uke X(
For me it's more interesting and hot if the uke is playing hard to catch kind of attitude XD And sadly there aren't many fics like this ;_;
That's why I'm very happy when I found yours!
Okie I'm going to read it now! Take care!
Yaaaay! Okie perhaps this doesn't count as a review post XDXD And I haven't even read it XD
I'm so excited right now and am gonna start reading it! Just wanna say thank you for replying to me
and continuing this story! And yes please make the upcoming chapters with torture and sadism too XD
And yes I strongly agree! You can exactly read my mind! I'm also prefer macho tough ukes oh yeaay baby! XD
It's more sexy that way graaaawr! XDXD I don't like it when ppl portray Cloud as a whimpy uke X(
For me it's more interesting and hot if the uke is playing hard to catch kind of attitude XD And sadly there aren't many fics like this ;_;
That's why I'm very happy when I found yours!
Okie I'm going to read it now! Take care!
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No way do I think Cloud's given in. FAT chance.
It would be really hot if one of the udder brudders were watching - or Vincent... Vincent would be a welcome sight in this story hehehe.
Other than those few, I don't care to visualize anyone else.
You've done excellent with this so far, and I mean that. I think all this is pretty freakin' awesome... what's going to happen afterward, I wonder? Or is his story just about the interrogation? Hmmm..... wonder wonder wonder.
I'm excited.
Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the good read!
It would be really hot if one of the udder brudders were watching - or Vincent... Vincent would be a welcome sight in this story hehehe.
Other than those few, I don't care to visualize anyone else.
You've done excellent with this so far, and I mean that. I think all this is pretty freakin' awesome... what's going to happen afterward, I wonder? Or is his story just about the interrogation? Hmmm..... wonder wonder wonder.
I'm excited.
Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the good read!
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December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I agree! no hate reviews! Because I soooo want you to continue this! I just know its gonna be hot! Please update soon!
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December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Ive been wanting a sadist BDSM rape LoxxCloud fanfic! :D There are just a few fics of this pairing ;_;
Yes! Please continue it! Will looking forward for the next chapters :D
Oh and may I suggest something if you don't mind?
The story already has a good start and there's a potential that the story will have a great plot.
However, I think it would be great if the flow of the story is quicker, if you understand what I mean ^^
Sorry my english is not very good but I'll try to explain it ^^
I mean it's good to explain how the character feels or explaining the setting the character is currently in, however
I think it would be great if the flow of the conversation or action is quicker ^^ This is to keep the reader interested in reading it and make
the fic not boring.
But anyway, I like your idea and your usage of words has resulted in a non monotone paragraph which is great!
Yes! Please continue it! Will looking forward for the next chapters :D
Oh and may I suggest something if you don't mind?
The story already has a good start and there's a potential that the story will have a great plot.
However, I think it would be great if the flow of the story is quicker, if you understand what I mean ^^
Sorry my english is not very good but I'll try to explain it ^^
I mean it's good to explain how the character feels or explaining the setting the character is currently in, however
I think it would be great if the flow of the conversation or action is quicker ^^ This is to keep the reader interested in reading it and make
the fic not boring.
But anyway, I like your idea and your usage of words has resulted in a non monotone paragraph which is great!