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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14 retake yo. (yes, I am reading the memories and about the past XD )
Haha I just realized something... Sin sounds like the fucking Cheshire Cat in this chapter XD hehe
Alright. I'm done.
Haha I just realized something... Sin sounds like the fucking Cheshire Cat in this chapter XD hehe
Alright. I'm done.
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love you! so nice to come back to a fresh new chappy!
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope they can help yazoo!! and YAY!! YOU GO CHAOS!!! WOOT!!
YOU BETTER SAVE YAZOO!!! or else.
ASOTA
YOU BETTER SAVE YAZOO!!! or else.
ASOTA
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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This time I kept this one for seconds, because I was scared for Yazoo, still am.
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July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*palms face* apparently I'm reviewing every other chapter now... anyway... loved both chapters... even though you're right, that one was a nail biter. I had to giggle evilly when I heard Chaos 'punishing' Sephy. lol, made me smile. Can't wait to read the next chapter... after all, Yazoo is still bleeding!!!! be back soon!
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*snicker-giggle-snort*
Cloud you dumb ass. I swear he wants to touch anything that glows or shimmers :o just like a bird. Heh heh heh. Seph's in shhiiiiiitttt XD tehehe Can't wait for the next chapter :D
Cloud you dumb ass. I swear he wants to touch anything that glows or shimmers :o just like a bird. Heh heh heh. Seph's in shhiiiiiitttt XD tehehe Can't wait for the next chapter :D
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* THE FUCK!?
I'm about to go on an internet/computer fast for the next week b/c of out of townness and you do an evil cliffy like that?! Damn you!
....but its okay i still love you anyways ^_^ your work is too good to let me stay mad at ya :P
I'm about to go on an internet/computer fast for the next week b/c of out of townness and you do an evil cliffy like that?! Damn you!
....but its okay i still love you anyways ^_^ your work is too good to let me stay mad at ya :P
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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POWER TO THE FANS!!!
I'm actually kinda changing my mind. To keep up with the flow of the story, SIN should probably die *sniff*. Love the new chapter as always. Can't wait to see what happens next *bites fingernails nervously*. YOU ROCK!! *eyes gleaming*
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POWER TO THE FANS!!!
I'm actually kinda changing my mind. To keep up with the flow of the story, SIN should probably die *sniff*. Love the new chapter as always. Can't wait to see what happens next *bites fingernails nervously*. YOU ROCK!! *eyes gleaming*
Fan-of-u-4-life
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, you made me cry too.
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was beginning to think, that the end was rather... uneventfull and quick. that was until I came to the end. Guess Sephy isn´t someone to leave the stage without a proper encore. update soon please?