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*runs naked and cackling after Yazoo*

Yazoo: Good GOD!! My eyes!! MY EYES!!!

...you didn't see that, ok? And I can't wait to see what tricks you have up your sleeve, concerning Yazoo. XD

*tries her hypnotizing skills* O.o O.O o.O : smeeex...smeeeeeeex...smeeeeeeeeeex...

OMG! I've read your story from beginning to end and I must say...IT KICKS SO MUCH ASS!!!!! So much so you can consider me a fangirl! Maybe not your #1 fangirl cause ASOTA would 'flay' me with the evil paper clips of doom, but I'm definately your second fangirl XD. I feel so bad for Vincent wahhh that evil Hojo is a monster. Kinda wished I had killed him with my highly sharpened butter knife grrrr. Anyway I must also tell you that your plot and writing is bitchin' and I can't wait for more smut! Because uke Vincent is HOT!! *passes out from Vince uke overload* @_@

Dear ASOTA

HEY! I'VE TRIED TO BE NICE BUT YOU HAVE CROSSED THE LINE!!! THE BATTLE IS ON ASOTA!!! IT IS ON!! BATTLE ROYAL BITCH! BATTLE ROYAL!! I WILL TAKE YOU OUT AND SLAP YOU SILLY! YOU HEAR ME?! IM SHARPENING MY PAPERCLIP AND I'LL SHOVE IT UP YOUR-Vincent's hand pops out of no were and covers mouth- MGHMSH! -insert hojo type insane laughter- YOU will rue the day YOU messed with ME! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA! I will never submit to you! I refuse to lose! You will go down before I let you win!

Love, Sapph.
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Woot! -insert more awesome battle music from last chapter- Ewwwww! -acts like a child-FIZZZZZZZZZZ, VINCENT'S EATTING CLOUD!..AGAIN! That can't be good for the stomach. No protein :O Wow, I need sleep :D Pleaseeee Vincent, snap out of it :'(

Vincent:....I'm not goinging anywhere :S It's not like I'm dead-
Sapph: DON'T SAY THAT DUMBASS! ITS A JINX!

Update again soon :D

Dear Emo_Panda..

Ah hell nah! You DO NOT want to go there.. There is a battle and the Paperclip of death is MINE. AND ITS SHARP! Be warned >:o I can only share the title with so many people :o So fair warning! You and that sharp butter knife best be watchin yourselves! Cause ASOTA AND I WILL TAKE YOU DOWN WIT US! -evil glare directed towards ASOTA- And Vincent sooo is not a Uke when it comes to Yazoo :o Yazoo would take it like a -Vincent's hand once again pops out of no where and covers mouth- mpgch. Though uke!vincent IS hot :o but only with pilots (huge Cid/Vin fan right here) or evil long-swordman XD p.s. Vincent (or at least his hair, boots and cape) is soooooo mine :o

Fair warning from Sapph.

oh my god!!! don't let vincent eat cloud!!! it's not healthy!!!
ASOTA

poor, poor sapphiredog... tsk... i never said anything about you submitting to me... i'm just GOING TO KILL YOU!!!!!!!!! *tackles sapphiredog, wrestles away the SHARP paperclip and holds it to sapphiredog's neck* i know this is cliche, but any last words before you go to the place where all imposter #1 fangirls go?

oh, and emo_panda? you're DAMN RIGHT!!! I WOULD FLAY YOU!!!

(sorry sapphiredog, i'm not very energetic today...)

with sweet lovings,
ASOTA

If this is your first fanfiction, well please let me know when you publish your first novel, because you are simply AMAZING! You have a great talent for creating a seamless continuity of the story, so the reader follows along easily, even though the universe it is set in is difficult to say the least, with unusual scenery, odd ball characters that each have a brilliant set of characteristics that need close attention to make the scene stay on track. I applaud your insight into each character, and even though the subjects you have chosen to pursue are at times very dark and deep, you portray the emotions of characters with sensitivity and also make the reader feel the horror or what ever emotion that the character feels.

I look forward to the next chapters of this story I can not imagine the depth of the emotions that Vincent will have to acheive to receive redemption and salvation of his very tortured soul. I wonder if Sephiroth will have anything to do with this journey for Vincent. If there is a way to notify me of your update for this story, please let me know via e-mail.

signed
one of your humbled fans

Taishorin

I’m curious about what the true form of Sin… I hope Cloud wouldn’t get hurt so badly, because Vincent won’t forgive himself for hurting his friends. The plot is more interesting and exciting, can’t wait for next chapter. XD good job XD

so much evilness to the vincent. lol intriguing as all hell though!!!

Gah! Loz you @%#^%@% @%@^%@$. Yazoo you little shit bag! The battle begins (insert evil laugh).

Haha I have to draw it out first XD But don't worry! I will give you a link when I do XD Crazy fan girl cat fight and maybe a Sin and Cloud from this chapter cause I'd love to try and draw Cloud's expression. "OMG IM ABOUT TO SHIT MYSELF!" Hehe. Can't wait for the next. This was a blissfilled few minutes for me to come home from a fucked up family wedding and read this thrilling chapter :D Vinny