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for Taming the Fates Amidst Chaos

by LadyVorlana

person Ringwen
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw yeah! Yazoo is back!! XD I wonder when he and Vincent will meet again...or him and Chaos..? O.O
Oh I'm probably being a boring reviewer since I only focus on Yazoo (but he IS my favorite..), I do love how you describe all the other characters and how you keep writing in a way that makes it hard to know what's going to happen. In other words: YOU ROCK!! :3
person Anon
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well i'm glad i make you laugh!!! when i read stories, i kind of see pictures of what's happening, not a movie.

it really surprised me when i found out that vincent had something ELSE inside of him! HOW MUCH ROOM DOES HE HAVE IN THERE?!?!?!!??!

oh, and yazoo wanted to enlist your help for his escape but i told him you wouldn't help because you're the one that gave him to me...he's currently tied up in my room.

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!

ASOTA
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I kinda was figuring that Sin was a split personality (more so then the demonic 3 and Chaos :D) that Vincent subconsciously made to hide everything and anything that involved emotion, thought... life even from Hojo. But eventually it manifested off the demons already in his mind and became worse then just a spilt mind. In my eyes it basically became a poltergeist in a way and since Chaos is the strongest and can hold his own will other then Vincent, the other 3 were subjected to the spilt personality more and fueled it. :P -takes a big breath- I over think things :D Another great chapter :D I wonder how Marlene would act towards Vincent after that whole episode. Can’t wait for 18 :D
person Anon
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
don't worry, i'll take care of him so we can play FOREVER AND EVER AND EVER AND EVER AND EVER AND EVER AND EVER AND EVER!!!!! won't that be fun?!?!?!? 8D
i'd hate to ever see anything like vincent's episode happen to one of my friends...i don't think that i could take it...
ASOTA
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I absolutely loved this chapter - you did an amazing job.
person lapislazulai (too lazy to log in...again)
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^___^ I love how fast you update. Makes it more bearable!

Aww. I forgive you for not murdering Cloud. It's all good. lol I really liked the little part with Nanaki yelling at Vincent. It was interesting to see your take on the whole situation. It makes sense. ^_^;; Looking forward to another update soon!
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor vincent D: and poor red for having to do that. My mind is a thinking. I think I might have 'Sin' figured out. Hmm. then again I could be soooooo wrong XD I will just have to wait and see >:D
person Anon
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*fans herself* ohmygodohmygodohmyGOD!!! YAZOO!!! HERE I COME!!! *jumps on yazoo and latches on*
ASOTA
person lapislazulai (too lazy to log in)
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you killed Cloud. I hate Cloud.

Nice chapter~!
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no. Poor little thing. Hojo is fucking beyond sick >:/ poor Vincent. I glad someone finally updated <-> I was dying of extreme boredum :D plzz update soon ^_^

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