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OMG&G I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU LEFT ME LIKE THAT - I MEAN A BULLET UP INTO HIS AS;LDFKJASDFLSKJDFL;DKJF omg&g! @..@

YOU.ARE.GENUIS.AND.AMAZING.BECAUSE i'd never think to 1) shove a gun up Sephy's ass & 2) pull the freaking trigger if he pissed me off....granted i'd love to see what happens with that cheeze grater ;D - maybe that will be my birthday thing...cheeze gratered Sephy parts ^^ thehehe wow i'm a perverted WEIRDO!!!

anyways! - awww thank you for putting Kadaj & Loz's names on Sephy's body - I was like...I hope they are on there..and now they are ^^


and I think I have a small plan forming...the song "Walk This Way" has the right beat for a club right? Idk...I suddenly heard it a few nights ago and was like @o@ ::invisions Yazoo poledancing to that song:: but that's not my request - that's just an idea - a thought - might change the song to something else like...Hollywood Undead because their songs are amazingly perverted...or like something else...::shifty eyes::

but anyways - thank you for updating ^^ made my night - ::sighs:: so far from home but still feeling wonderful right now ^^

~ily~

Oh my GODS! A dedication to little old me ! Thank you sooo much lovely lady, like I said on DA: You've just made my week! And oh yesss it has satisfied the sadistic side of me muchly.

And what a finale! I doubt that Cloud is going to be sleeping easy any time soon.
You know, I can't believe that this is your first fanfiction! I've been writing for years and can't write half as well as you *hugs*

Until next time, my dear,

Kerianya XxX

Oh yeah!!!! Justice in the end!!! Now to Yazoo, please, begging here.

*looks over the chapter* you know, vincent really should have tormented Seph some more. i was really hoping he'd do the whole 'hard for hours' thing. maybe vinny could waste a down phoenix on seph and prolong his suffering?

Ohh the trigger gets pulled! But the question is this: is he mind fucking teh General a bit more before that final blow or is it for reals?

What an interesting cliffie, can't wait to see what happens next.

"With that, he pulled the trigger."

WHEEE!!!! FINALLY! WOOT WOOT! MC and I have benn WAITING for that XD woot I love you! LOVE YOU, YOU EVIL QUEEN OF CLIFFIES!!!

Yummmyyy *purrs* *snicker* hehe Cloud is scared for his own 'man-veggies' now XD hehe

Excellent chapter our wonderful slaver driver. We bow down to your greatness, our Master >:D

BWAHAAHAHAA!!! Excellent, excellent. Bravo! I love the tribute to Kerianya about the cheese grater and Cloud's response to that. Most excellent work as usual dear. Keep it up and I throughly look forward to the next chapter.

Fan-of-u-4-life
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Yeah what's up with that?! Review section longer than chapter ::mutters grumply under breath and pouts:: T-T

::sighs:: I'll get over it - don't make this a habbit though >:o! - ily still ^o^!!!!!!!

Awwww....Sin...shall be no more...? D; ::turns around and pretends to cry as she throws the confetti:: I have nothing! ::turns back around quickly and looks around on the defensive:: No I'm kind of really torn now...it's like...awww...D; the ultimate sacrafice ::sniffles::

still wonderful ::koffdespitelengthkoff:: but I shall hold it against you - I understand writers block....or other things that distract one from their goal ::thinks hard:: yeah....it's like...trying to read Breaking Dawn when your family and friends suddenly decide they want to take you places and talk to you D;! It's like ::sobs:: LEAVE ME ALONE WITH MY BOOK MAN D;!!! - But I lived - I'll live - and I have no idea what point I was trying to make....but I'm still thinking about that EH thing I need to send you. Sucks because I was in the car and suddenly hit me...but like a MORON! - I forgot paper and pen at home XS WHY!? - But I shall come up with a new idea! >:o yeah! NEW IDEA! ^^ I'm going to think ::looks at clock:: - sleep on that one ^^!

ily~

Oh and SapphireDog...idk if you'll read this or not...someone pass the word along please but....copy and paste your comments somewhere else before you send. I always do that now...so much easier XS - so yeah...though I'd like ta throw that out there ^^~

WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE??? *scratches head confused* uh... hmm... WHAT HAS MY BODY BEEN DOING WITHOUT ME?!?!?!?! OMG!!! ...and there's something sleeping on my head........ :/ i'll just sit here for now... *sits*
ASOTA