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for Break Down

by Mitts

person Savaial
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is the kind that draws you in instantly. You keep your reader's attention too. High drama, the kind that makes your heart beat faster... Wooooo! Such brutality with these two forceful wills clashing up against each other.
I eagerly await your next chapter.
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:sniff: sad. Poor Cloud.

I can't think of anything lewd to say about this other than..

HEAL HIS PAIN, SEPHYYYYY!
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Save him!!! Please update soon!!
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YEESH! Cloud has it rough neh? But he seems sturdy enough! I wonder how Sephiroth will take this? OOO! Cant wait for more!
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My actual reaction to seeing a new chapter posted :

:swallows food in a hurry and quadruple clicks on Break Down: OOOH!!

Oh, Cloud. You're such a tenacious little fucking D, but you gotta know that Seph is gonna ream you. Habitually, upside down and backwards.

And I said it before and I'll say it again; Sephiroth is SUCH a COCK.

I'm perched in wait for the next chapter.
person Golden Feathers Edward
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-giggle- such a visous thing isn't he? Go for the groin Cloudy!!! -cackle-
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Snapple! Don't do it, Cloud! Just be a good boy and let the General have his way with you!

Cloud never listens, does he? Sigh.
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sephiroth is SUCH a cock, haha! I loove it!
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sephiroth is such a bastard! I can't wait to see what he has in store for Cloud and the other kid!
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Cloud...He belongs to Seph now.

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