rate_review Reviews

Hey, so far I think it's an interesting story and I would love to read more...you manage to set up a nice plot so far and the lack of knowing what is going to happen when Zack goes to Seventh Heaven is killing me. That said and done with, I would like to see some longer chapters from you, though I understand that it's hard. Also your grammar needs a bit of work as does your spelling. Except for those three things I really have been enjoying your story and hope that you have another chapter up soon. Ciao!

I like the fic and all but you've got to make these chapters
longer.