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You're an evil guy Seph, asking me to review this... I'm dying here y'know, pal. You better love what I write. ;D

Okay, I've never written an review before, so I have no clue what to actually write... Honestly, I suck at formal stuff.
Okay, well your story was ace~ ^^
There I'm done, be happy~

Uh, fine.
It hads a good story line, I laughed at how it just suddenly happened, there was no sort of lead up towards them kissing and stuff, it just seemed like nothing was going to happen and yet near enough everything happened. You know I'm a sucker for a good SephxCloud. ^^
I really think you did ace on this story, I knew you would of 'cause it's you and I know what you and your Sephiroth are capable of. x3
Yeah, I liked your story, was epic the second read through~
And a drunk Cloud is a happy Cloud~

There we go, thats my review and I suck at them, but be happy I obliged Mr. General, Sir. ^^
See you on msn. xD;;

:D Fixed the problems that needed my attention. Thanks for the review guys! :3 ♥

Nice. You paced everything out so well. The only thing I had trouble with was the paragraph formation. I think you developed the relationship just right for a short story. BTW, you incorporated the senses in your fic so well. The contrasts rocked.

This was extremely sweet, and very entertaining to read.

I have .. one minor critique.. well, it's only a negative because it made me bust out laughing in the middle of a lemon.

You said 'taint'. LOL!

But on the whole, delightful. If you expanded, I would definitely keep reading.