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omg this is a awesome story :)

Wow. Just... Wow.

Please continue. You're conveying the emotions beautifully and capturing the characters so well.

Holy Crap! This story is SOOOO good! :D I can't wait to read the rest of it, please do NOT stop writing!

Well I'm absolutely in love with First Class now :D Zack lives?! I cant tell you how happy that makes me!!! I'm sorry this is such a short review but if I were to list all the things I love about FC I'd basically be recapping the whole thing XD I'm also a fan of your other works! You're an amazing author :D

Upon stumbling into this site, I knew EXACTLY what I was looking for. Serious, not always fluffy, ZackxCloud fiction.
Fiction with good description, few mistakes, and not the underlying feeling that a 12 year old wrote the piece. God knows my brain is full of terrible fanfiction, things I wish I hadn't read, but giggle about sometimes.

In my search for some deep, perfect ZackxCloud, I realized there wasn't much to be found. However, I stumbled across your "Animal Instincts" and it immediately drew me in. Finishing the chapter I HAD to see if you had more. And you did! It was a surpreme joy to stumble over this one. I had started reading it, but had to stop and go to bed when I started feeling ill. However, I came back hours later, laying in my bed, just to read this lovely writing. It has me wrapped around it's finger. I WANT to know more, and can't wait for the day when you update. The descriptions are perfect, the characterization is completely proper, and top notch. You have a wonderful thing going on here.

Please continue writing at some point; when you are ready, of course. This story begs to be continued.

that was awesome! i loved those single sentence paragraphs you had sometimes. they were very strong. and i liked the description in the first chapter. i always cry for the death scene, but i think you did an extremely good job describing this one, and it wasn't all cheese-loaded. update sooooonnnnn!!!!

i can't wait for the next part! this story's awesome! keep up the good work ^_^

Honestly, for a while I was debating whether or not to read this fic. *shrug* For some reason the summary didn't quite appeal to me, or maybe it was the warnings. Still, I'm glad I finally did since I too am a fan of the Cloud/Zack coupling. *sniffles* I still hate the fact that SE decided to kill off the my favorite character... Now, if I were a writer I would so try and think of another way to make him live other than having Hojo be involved some how. *kills teh hobo* Sadly, I am unable to write as of late. My muse has either left me or is taking a nap that's lasting a few years. *shakes fist* Damn muse... Anyway, Hope to see an update soon~! ^,^

~Crescent

I love this fic! It's excellently written and tugs at the heartstrings. I hope you plan to continue it, I'll be eagerly waiting the next chapter! Keep writing!

Awwwww so cute!!! I love this pairing thanks for posting it up for us to read.

*is still playing Crisis Core*

I've been in love with Zack since I saw him in the Last Order OVA a couple of years back... him and Cloud are my favorite FFVII guys so yay a fic about them... hehe and I love the one liners OMG I'd totally use them *has cheesy one-liners herself*

Love your AMV's too babe but they're so tear jerking I have to stop come back watch some more then stop again ect ect

very beautifully written we need more what if Zack survived fics out there so thank you

Keep up the good work