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fluffy I Love it for once zack Lives

I was happy to see that you updated, keep going! I look forward to the next part.

I think ya made a good choice with the goons, it did help out. Your action writting was awesome!! I loved it!!! (hmm that did sound pretty kinky, but i loved it! LOL) Naw ya made him perfect!!! *hugs* Wow!! But it paid off really well! No I should be thankin ya 4 writtin such a wonderful story!! ^__^ Now 4 my review 4 the newest chapter!! Lol. I LOVED IT!!! Finally Cloud sees the truth!! Poor Cloudy thought he'd gone crazy again lol. I thought it was kinda funny when Cloud tried 2 beat poor Zacky up and I love it when Zack pinned down Cloud....so many yaoi images came 2 mind!! XD And the lies Zack was tellin the hotel clerk was 2 funny!! LOL *happy sighs* This makes me love CloudxZack even more now!!! I wish I could write a fanfic about them...hmm...maybe I should try sometime Lol. Anyways I love you and your story!! *HUGS* ^____^ Can't wait 2 see what happens next!! (Maybe some kisses < and/or more XD > 4 Zacky and Cloudy? Maybe? LOL XD) ^_______^

I apologize that I haven't been reviewing from chapter one, but I just wanted to keep reading, I forgot to pause to review!

I. LOVE. This. Fic. Honestly. Revival fics rank highest on my list of likes, after all.

Zack trying to be stealthy is fun, considering that due to his nature, I would think it would be hard for him. And see, he went and blew his cover! Oh, Zack, when will you learn that you has not teh mad skillz for plotting?

Aerith giving her life for him, wow. I didn't expect that to come out of there. In fact, I tend to forget she exists, lol. It was touching, however. Even though I was glad the girl died. Heh.

The preview for the next chapter sounds particularly intriguing, and I can't wait to read it!

Even though you're not a fan of writing angst, your angsty chapters were incredible.
And I have totally fallen in love with the way you write Zack, one-liners and all.

Oh and yes! I love all your fics! You're a favorite of mine!
Yes it's true, I'm a fan. And proud!

Can't wait for more! Keep it up!

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Again, a good chapter. I could sense the writer's block towards the end and there were a few typos and missing words, but overall, another well done installment. I just hope there was a reason for Aerith's death at the midpoint; at least more than just an excuse to get her out of the way. I look forward to your next chapter.

Oh I so so so love this chapter. Oh! Cloud had me going, let me tell you. I was like 'touch him! touch him! ' it was so sweet, so hot, so good. AMAZING!

Now write some more, because the universe depends on it.

I reread the chapter. And then I thought thouroughly about your writer's block, and how to help you overcome it.

So, here's a storyline suggestion:

GRATUITOUS SEX. THROBBING RODS OF MAN MEAT. CLOUD SOBBING BECAUSE HE'S A LITTLE ANGSTY WHORE.

Hope that helped. As previously stated, get to writing, bitch.

^_^ thanks for the review, btw. MWUAAAH!

OMG! XD I love your story! You did a good job with Zack too! Hope to see an update soon!

Ah, yes I'm a fan. Of all your writing, not just this one.

Though I admit, this story is pretty damn fabulous.

Keep it up! Can't wait to read more.

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