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Keep it up!

I love this even more than before. First of all, new chapter in less than a week. I so wish I could do that.
I love the humor in this; "...an energetic Chocobo on crack," "...a strategically placed man with an afro..." Those two in particular, I had to stop and just burst out laughing. That whole scene made me giggle. The second scene was hot, to say the least, and I am dying to read more. After getting a taste of your abilities at writing smut, I am throughly pleased. I know I'm not going to be disappointed in the future. The abrupt change from smut to angst came out of nowhere, but it makes scene. I mean, it's Cloud we're talking about!
Speaking of Cloud, I am so happy that Zack and Cloud are not OOC. They sound exactly how I imagine. Thank you so much.
In short, I laughed, I almost cried again, I could not look away (except for those two parts), and I loved every moment of it. You know, I think I love this story so much, because this is the style I strive to write; humorous, smutty, and angsty all at once. Regardless, I am now a dedicated fan, if I wasn't already. Keep writing!
~Blue
P.S-> Yeah, I try to think my reviews out. I think this took me, like, 20 minutes to write, but it was totally worth it.

I really enjoyed your writing style and the way you portrayed the characters. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I laughed, I cried, I went "Hey grrl, Heeeeey" at the naughty bits.

I like Zack stalking a poor, grieving Cloud and freaking him the hell out.

Make more! Make more!

Great Story :D YEEEEEAAAAAAAAAH ZACK IS ALIVE WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT :DDDDDDDDDDD
but it's sad that Cloud doesn't know :( poor little cloud but hopefully he will know soon :) in later chapters ;) and I really had to laugh when Cloud covered the front of his pants XD looooooool teenage hormones ^^
I like your story :) I think the first line of the rewiev was proof enought XD it's not an ordinary plot :D keep that going, your writing style is great, too, I think you will get even better when you write more and more and more :) What I mean with this is: WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER? XD :)
next chapter next chapter next chapter please *sing* :D sry >.> :)

Hey there, hon! Thanks a milion for the review answer. Most authors don't bother, so it was a pleasant surprise! You can bet everything you got that I'll be following this fic (with at times an obsession-like viciousness, which I hope won't feak you out) and every other you write! I was, in fact, ecstatic to see you'd updated this as soon as you had. It still had and aftertaste of angst in it, but I had fun with it nonetheless. I'll be looking forward to the next one (and, hopefully, more Zack/Cloud goodness), love! Kisses!

Oh hell. So emotive, so deep and dark! You can make the words do your bidding. I loved this fic, truly. It wrenched my heart. Great work!

PLEASE UPDATE O_O I can't wait!

Absolutely beautiful. I loved it.
And wow... using Josh Groban... now I don't feel like the only one who listens to him while I write sad stories!!! ehehe....
Anyway, I definitely look forward to more.

Oh God, I wanted to cry. I still kinda do, but it's the happy kind, ya know? You really captured that scene, and I am throughly amazed. Furthermore, you're adding what I wished for; for Zack to live, and it flowed so well.
Damn, you've rendered me speechless. I love this so much. Please continue writing.
~Blue