rate_review Reviews

Very nice! Kept me interested from beginning to end! (btw, thanks for linking that picture OwO)

Oh my God! That was so hot!
Really really super great :D

O.o Dat was sum hawt shit mahn. SUM HAWT SHIT! WHOO! *fans self* THAT WAS SMOKIIIN!

Dear gods above that was AWESOME! SO SO SO SO hot! I loved every single second and your writing is incredible! THANK YOU!

Now I am not prone to liking stories written in first person...but this, this one was simply beautiful. I have to say the part that visually took my breath away when I imagined it was when Sephiroth bathed under the mako stream. Your description was beautiful and the feelings he got from it I could only imagine was utter pleasure...simply beautiful. I am a fan of SephyCloud pairings and this one stole my heart and made me smile like the shameless fangirl that I am.
Wonderful job on this, you have a unique style that is easy and pleasing to read!
-Lys

Aw man, that was interesting. A little bit too AU but who cares when you have such a nice outcome! The chemistry between the two was A+. (^_^)

Wow. Lovely story. Its so hard to find Seph/Cloud fics that aren't OOC. Seriously, this one was like a breath of fresh air. I loved it.

Dude!~This was so awesome! I love how you portrayed the characters and the scenic description was marvelous. I wish I'd found this earlier. Well done =^_^=

Lovely and very nicely written. Great use of the first-person narrative, which is so damned hard to get right.

Also, meeow. Very shmexy. :)

A big THANK YOU to all my reviewers! This was my first attempt at male on male and I desperately love feedback. So, Thankyouthankyouthankyou!