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I'm just thrilled you updated! nice work btw. I'm really looking forward to what else you put in here. Keep it up!

I really like this story. I'm always a sucker for stories about Cloud going back in time to fix things. XD This was well written and I can't wait for more. Keep it up! :bows:

love the little Angeal/Zack action. update ASAP

Oh please tell me there's going to be more of this! Please? I can't believe I didn't find this sooner, but I determined to follow it for as long as it goes. So please update when you can! =^_^=

Hey I like this story, it's really intersting and original.... i mean this a first i've seen where Cloud goes back in Zacks days.. Please update soon huh? I wanna know what happens next.

Awsome story hope you update soon

This really is an amazing story. I have yet to read one where Cloud goes back in time to re-write history, but the premise and the execution have drawn me in completely. I love the interactions between Zack and Cloud and, find myself especially drawn to your Cloud. It's so rare to read a story where Cloud hasn't become a complete uke when near Zack but your Cloud strikes me as the type that is quiet but deadly. I like that he can go toe to toe with Zack and I hope that will apply to all aspects of their relationship. I thank you immensely for that. This story is shaping up to be a worthy read, great job. Till next update.

...dude...awesome. That's all I gotta say.

I die for time-travel fics!!! I can't wait for more, so far this is one of three fics that are timetravel and worth reading, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

It was good to see that you updated, keep it up and I look forward to the next.