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I really like this. It's sad what happened to zack I just wish there was a way it could have been avoided

I read this one before and loved it then, too.

I feel hook, line, and sinker for this. At the end when it was revealed that it was an escort, I was like... WHAAAAAAAT? NOOOOO!

Excellente.

Oh fucking hell! Though the whole story was filled with lovemaking, I could feel the underlaying sadness. The ending made me tear up. For Cloud to have loved Zack so much and to have still thought about him... You wrote that with artistic precision, my friend. I'm not a fan of Zack death fics but yours wasn't about that, or at least not really. You managed to give the readers the reality of Zack's state but not rub it in our faces that he's gone.

I loved how you subtly emersed past and present into each other. It made the whole story bittersweet. That takes talent, friend. It still breaks my heart to know that Cloud is suffering. *sighs* But what can we do?

Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece.