rate_review Reviews

Wow!I really like the begining of this story!The characters, the atmosphere, the relatioship between the 2 main characters, I like all of that, including the style.=)
I hope you'll post a new chapter soon, I can't wait to see how the story will turn.=D

Yay! Chapter two!! *does happy dance* I know how hard it is to have two jobs, but keep it up, and at the same time relax~!

This is delicious; romance and angst in just the right mix. Reno's having trouble admitting he wants more than a casual thing and I bet Cloud's feeling guilty that he's replaced Zack. So, what are they going to do about it? You have to let us know.

This fic is nicely done! You got the characters personality right on the dot! Keep it up~! Can't wait to read more!

dat's one good opening chapter, i'm really interested in reading the coming chapter. There;s still not much to be commented on now but i'm really hoping you'll update soon. =)

i like it! really nice intro. there's never enough renoxcloud fics here and most of the time they're one-shots. *cries from lack of cloudxreno luvin'* so i look foward to your next update.

I love how this is going so far, sugar. I think there are unfortunately too little good Reno/Cloud fics out there, but stories like yours more than make up for it. I really enjoyed this. The grammar and spelling are just fine, which I find is a frustratingly rare thing amongst authors nowadays. The characters' personalities make me curious, wanting to see more. Ant the writing style, the fact that it's mostly from Reno's perspective, is a wonderful plus too, i my opinion. It's always fun seeing things from a redhead's point of view! Anyway, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. Kisses!

Hello!
Wow, that story was really good! Please write another chapter I'm dying to know what will happen between Reno and Cloud.
Carry on the good work!
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