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This, my friend, is a really interesting story.

I wish I could read more of it already, but meh. I just hope that you really do plan on continuing it.

NU! Kaiten does not allow!! >.<
Your story ate my grammar for a bit, but its back now (mostly...)
Poor Cloud... a (somewhat confusing) reunion, an animal for a lover, and now SOLDIER after said lover... I just wanna give him a hug!!

Continue soon, please!!

On the 'critique' side of things, i applaud you. I'm an avid beta (beta, Personal Assistant, Slave - same thing) and yet I couldn't find a single mistake (not that i was looking all that hard, but still! mistakes usually attack me before i even get to them.) I am totally content with this story, even though it is a bit 'dry' for my tastes. then again, 'my tastes' are odd and flowery (with lots and lots of adjectives and synonyms!)so , needless to say, I dont find many authors outside of England that write to my tastes.
{you may be saying "yeah, what a great beta, she doesn't even capitalize!" well, im lazy and this is just a review... and i'm the one writing it, so i don't really care... yeah- i have issues}
~Kai

OOH LORD! I... am absolutely speechless. I LOVE your writing--it's the best FF7 fic I've read in AGES, and that cliffhanger! I think I'm going to die of wait!

Same goes for First Class!!! Am EAGERLY awaiting updates on these two gems. OGODafdlsfjl;

~the seph 8Db

Wow! I truly love this story! I can't wait for more great job!

Wow. this one of the finest cloud/zack fics i have read. I really have enjoyed it so far. I would love it if you would continue

Very nice first chapter, cruel cliffhanger LOL! Please update asap ^_^

This one is as good as the others! It's a very interesting look at what could have happened if Zack lived and is very entertaining. Keep writing!

Ok, this is definitely a unique take on the story. I would love to see what happens next.

Ahhhhh OMG you sooooo have to continue I'm loving this babe seriously

Zack/Cloud *fangurling*