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by Rina76

person Kerianya
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! It's very good. Please update soon. Advent Children incest is always welcomed.

Loz isn't my favourite but I couldn't help but sympathise with him. You've portrayed him really well.

Kerianya XxX
person x
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eek, Loz!! He needs more luff. My favorite character, the big crybaby. =]

DEFINITELY continue. Even if it was a story about a trip to the grocery store or something mundane, it'd be awesome just because it's finally story about Loz.

All it needs is more Vincent now..
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to see more of this, too. This first chapter was well done. ^__^

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