rate_review Reviews

I really enjoyed your story. You certainly did a good amount of research into the background of Final Fantasy VI, especially the enemies. I really liked the personalities of Coco, Cherry, Level 80, and the Misty sisters. It was sweet the way they lovingly enslaved the party. However, I found the last few chapters to be diverged from the earlier story, as little if any was seen of the afforementioned girls, instead focusing solely on the corrupted party. While I enjoyed seeing the party's transformation, especially Terra and Celes, I would have liked to see more of the other girls, as I felt that they were a driving force in the story. For example, it would have been nice to see how Edgar's reunion with the Misty sisters turned out. However, the story was still very enjoyable, and I plan to read more of your work.

First thing, this was a very well thought out and interesting retelling of the dark time after the destruction of the world. Both the time in which the story takes place and the motivations and essences of the characters are all thoughtfully retained and visited by the author carefully. His or Her language in describing the sensual scenes walks the delicate line of being erotic and descriptive with out falling hard on the pornographic language that is often over implemented describing sex and masturbation.

Most exciting and integral to the story were the seduction/hypnotism scenes where the Mistresses woo the heroes into submissive slaves. The process is believable and erotic as the characters lose their will and are tempted and addicted to the dark energies. Some characters are able to struggle out of these situations and others yet are re enslaved, the scenes being instantly believable within the construct of the narrative.

While this story, which I read in one setting, may have some occasional trouble with fast expositions at the end of chapters, I feel the artist's respect and knowledge of the source material and skill at implementing the characters in erotic situations holds this story up as one to defiantly pay attention to for fans of the original. A must read.

I made an account just so I could tell you how awesome of a story I thought this was. I was hooked from the beginning to the end.

You are a great writer, and I look forward reading anything you put out in the future.

This has been a really fun ride. :D

The wait was surely worth it, I think.

If and when you do come back to the world of writing, I'll welcome you back with trumpets and cookies.

~Rubyfruit~

Wow...I'm speechless. Lots of chapters, lots of smut. I have to confess I look for your stories and am always thrilled when you update. I also like the fact this one had some het in it as well as yuri. Both are hot, but I have a thing about big strong heroes falling to women...

Anyway, I loved it and I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with next!