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hope u update this. it is really good.

Yay, an update. Once again I bow to your mad writing skills and knowledge. Eating disorders do not go away with a kiss and a hug and especially not when people try to coerce you. I love the fact that Zack has a phych degree just so he could understand Seph. That is love right there. Hope to see another update soon.

Aww poor Cloud! I can totally see why Seph would be beyond frustrated trying to get him to just eat. I can't wait to see where the story goes! Love it as always!

Aww, I hope Cloud can put on some weight, poor little guy. Seph can't fix everything for him, he has to fix himself in this, I guess.

The little convo at the end was really hilarious. "You're a slut?" HAHAHA I cracked up big time at that one.

Good chapter, can't wait to see the next one :3

I promise not to kill you if you promise not to kill Cloud. Well I suppose I can even forgive you that as long as Roxas lives and has hot sex with Axel. I love Roxas and I have no clue why. Axel, Reno, and Riku are normally my favorite type of characters. Loud, fun, and egotistical or quiet, dark, and egotistical. I hated Roxas when I started to play but he grew on me and I was crying so hard when he disapeared.
Anyway I love the updates. I was mortified along with poor Sephy in that Body Shot scene but it made me giggle anyway. I'm like Sephiroth in that I don't like to be in that sort of party scene. Mainly because I know I'd make an ass of myself trying to look cool which I totally am not. I'd give a longer review but it's late and I have to go to work in the morning so good night and I promise a better review next time.
PS I mean it about hot Axel and Roxas sex. I would totally forgive you for killing cloud if you put that in there.

I started reading this on recommendation from a friend of mine... and all I have so say is that I love your story so far! ^_^ You've got a hilarious writing style, and I never would've thought to place Cloud as a ballet star. (I've been writing a more KH-centric fic with the cast in a theatre, but it's the closest I could get.)

Five out of five stars, keep writing! Hope you update again soon!

Kitty >^..^<_/"

The plot thickens! I was wondering when Seph was gonna take some action to get Cloud help with his eating disorder.

Holy...wow! Okay, I loved this story! Only a couple stories have had me so enraptured that I was literally jumping in my chair, unable to breathe with anticipation, and giggling madly all at the same time! Wow that was a long sentence! I would be eternally grateful if you could add me to your update list! My email: indigo_ophelia3@yahoo.com Thank you so much for posting such a wonderful story!

I'm so glad Tifa didn't give Cloud a guilt trip or anything, I thought she might what with the way she was so shocked at finding them kissing and such. So... I'm guessing Cloud's a gogo dancer??

The only reason I started to read this story is it's my day off and I'd already washed my dogs and nothing good was on TV. However once I started reading it I really started to like it and respect your mad writing skills. This is a good story and you either know what you're writing about or you've really done your homework. I hope to read another chapter soon.