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I'm trying to go there and there's no link!!
Lol it doesn't matter, I've seen the movie and I can imagine the whole thing.
I've been reading this story since you published it but I never had the courage to review, but I have to say...Awesome!!
And I love fag-tastic Genesis!

MOOOOOREEE 0_______________________0

Oh. My. God.

I laughed so hard at the ending, I think my stomach might've just ripped wide open. Too funny! Oh man. I need to breathe.

It was so sweet, Seph defending little Cloudy. And now Cloudy has a lot of money... but wait! No mention of the legal age of consent in Nibelheim! Dear godddd, you keep us on the edge of our seats, I'm sure. But, now that Seph did something like THAT, I'm sure Cloud will definitely want to put out, and seriously... would YOU turn that down, legal age or no?

I love this damn fic, more than I can even express with silly words.

Awww seems like maybe everyone had something to gain by keeping Cloud illiterate..? :c that's really very sad, but Sephy to the rescue! And I wonder what he found out about the age of consent?.. because if it was in his favor, this chapter should have been some hot man lovin'! Or maybe I need to learn some patience, har har XD

Anyways, sooo glad to see more!

"Hi! Wanna play hide the salami?"

"JESUS CHRIST ALMIGHTY."

.....AAAAAAH-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA!!!!!! I loved that last part SO much. XD
That was a great update! (Yay, Cloud is going to learn to
read Horton!). Thanks for sharing, and keep up the great work! ^_^

Haha! You show em, Seph! Stupid Shinra bastards.

Love this fic and can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh, YAY! Sephy saved Cloud from all of his debt without him even having to ask! Awwww!

And fucking hell! Being used as an epense account, NO BUENO! I'm glad Cloud will at least get to keep the money he earns! I'm so worked up over this injustice!

The only cure is smut! C'monnn age of consent!

HAHAAAA! Poor Seph!! Cloud is such a little bitch, I love him to pieces in this.

Ohhh noooo. C'mon, age con't get in the way or some super sexy smut! :O He can keep it all hidden, or something. lol

I want to read more, right now.

Haha, Seph's room isn't immaculate. Somehow I really like that. So perfect on the battlefield but omg look at that unorganized room with super ugly oomforters that smell like bread! XD Bloody perfect.

Ack! 7 chapters down already? Hmph, that just means you need to write more, cuz I absolutely adore this fic.

Sorry I didn't stop to review every chapter; I just had to keep reading and stopping was not an option. lol

Great work, can't wait for more!